Comment from justafan

Exceptional

I definitely have to go back to catch up here!!
Well done my friend, well done indeed!
Thank you for sharing your work here with us.

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Aww... thanks Missy :)

Good to hear from you! I appreciate your great review and gracious stars.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from siais

Excellent

Incredible I was glued to it and started reading like one of those horror stories I read during my journey, well written and waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing, take care dear!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021

Thank you, Siais :)

This just made my day! So thrilled to hear you enjoyed this. I may not get many reviews, but yours is worth many.

Thanks again! Hope to hear from you again.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Another short post!! SHANA! I literally think you enjoy doing this, LOL. I have to say my favorite part about this chapter is how Carrie is crying out to God. Yeah, I know, some people may think its corny or you should just omit it, but let's be honest, not many authors mention God in their stories or acknowledge him and come up with some evolution crap. (Excuse the language lol) But I commend you for adding that to Carrie's line. I really appreciate it. As a Christian it's important to me to see that in stories. But I must address... WHY DIDN'T CARRIE CALL HER UNCLE?! He knows people that can help Joseph! As soon as I read that part I knew you wouldn't write in to have her call Frank. You truly know how to bait, surprise, and hook people at the same time, Shana. Well done!! But now, I have to WAIT until next Monday! Ughhhhhh.......................... (LOL)

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Thanks AJ :)

You really made my day. Your feedback is so fun to read. I would have added the whole chapter, but everyone complains about long posts, so I break them up.
I'm glad you mentioned God. My faith in Him is very strong, so my Breedline have a strong faith in God as well. And yes, some people on this site complains about that. But I don't care. This is my story and I will write it how I want.
Carrie is afraid to tell her uncle about Joseph because she doesn't want him to go to jail and she still doesn't know about the Breedline.
Next week, you will learn what happened to Carrie when she was a child and her visit with God's battle angel. It will all be in her dream.

Thanks again for taking the time to read my chapter and for the awesome review.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 07-Jul-2021

Aww, you're very welcome! I enjoy your stories A LOT, if you can't tell, LOL. I'm glad you have a strong faith in God; us Christians must REPRESENT!!! But I don't know Shana, if I can wait a WHOLE week to know what happened....lol. You're welcome again!!!

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I like the way you work your narrative Shana, going into the depths of your character's psyche and exploring the depths of their dilemma. I know Carrie is more than the usual normal as all your characters are. And because all are equal in God's eyes, we all deserve a chance, even demon infested people like Joseph, "the demon made me do it", but Joseph is doing what God wants, his own lack, and Carrie believes in him, love it Shana. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Thank you dear friend :)

I'm always so happy to hear from you. Your encouraging words and feedback is helpful. I hope I can get this book finished by Christmas. I have two more book ideas I'd like to do. And soon, I want to also do a few children's books. That idea has always been on my bucket list.

Thanks again!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 06-Jul-2021

Me too, I lead the kid?s worship at church I?ve written a few kid?s songs, I?ve got enough material for about 37 books for adult books, hah hah

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

That is fantastic!

reply by royowen on 07-Jul-2021

Thanks Shana