Lovers Yearn
poem about passion3 total reviews
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Congratulations on your win.
This is ingeniously put together. The pace, the placement and the rhymes. I have never seen a 5-7-5 like it.
I'm sorry I'm out sixes. Please humbly accept a virtual one.
I'll be bookcasing this.
Katiemae
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Congratulations on your win.
This is ingeniously put together. The pace, the placement and the rhymes. I have never seen a 5-7-5 like it.
I'm sorry I'm out sixes. Please humbly accept a virtual one.
I'll be bookcasing this.
Katiemae
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Thank for the enthusiastic review ..
Glad you enjoyed the read and the rhyme .
Keep safe!
Comment from rhonnie69
Ciao, poet: I like this wee poem in that it puts me in the mind of my best friend. She introduced me to two of her eagle friends. She reminds me here of their courtship, which is an elaborate aerial display that begins with both birds flying leisurely in circles, the male above the female. Suddenly the male swoops down toward his mate. Moments before contact, she turns upside down and thrusts her feet upward. United They Fall. With talons locked together the two birds tumble toward the ground, as if out of control. But at the very last instant...the birds break free. Their bond is confirmed, or renewed. They then temporarily part. Flying off in different directions. But they both yearn to get back together....A.S.A.P. Again, poet. I thank you for sharing. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.
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Ciao, poet: I like this wee poem in that it puts me in the mind of my best friend. She introduced me to two of her eagle friends. She reminds me here of their courtship, which is an elaborate aerial display that begins with both birds flying leisurely in circles, the male above the female. Suddenly the male swoops down toward his mate. Moments before contact, she turns upside down and thrusts her feet upward. United They Fall. With talons locked together the two birds tumble toward the ground, as if out of control. But at the very last instant...the birds break free. Their bond is confirmed, or renewed. They then temporarily part. Flying off in different directions. But they both yearn to get back together....A.S.A.P. Again, poet. I thank you for sharing. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done 5-7-5 poem about love and romance and how love calms you down even though it speeds you up first.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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This is a well done 5-7-5 poem about love and romance and how love calms you down even though it speeds you up first.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my wee poem about passion.
Keep safe!
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Any time.
I'll try my best.
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