"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "A Dying Fall''(B)"Is the living really alive and living?
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Comment from kahpot
About time we got to read a bit about you and your time and experience through all this, I know it still relates to loss and fall, very well said-a courage's write****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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About time we got to read a bit about you and your time and experience through all this, I know it still relates to loss and fall, very well said-a courage's write****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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The next?
A Comedy!
Thanks kahpot,
Ricky
Comment from Sanku
Your story has come out in precise words and sentences. You have played with words and sentences eg 'Once upon a time'. The ragic end of your son and your wife has affected you deeply .You also feel guilty that you could not repair the marriage .but I don't think it is your mistake..
It was a very good attempt to portray the journey of your life.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Your story has come out in precise words and sentences. You have played with words and sentences eg 'Once upon a time'. The ragic end of your son and your wife has affected you deeply .You also feel guilty that you could not repair the marriage .but I don't think it is your mistake..
It was a very good attempt to portray the journey of your life.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Well I guess this is improvement over the one star I just got from this idiot!
Yes,who just joined this month!
Of course these new people that start giving poor reviews don't understand the writers number one.
And, number two?
They don't know how to writer.
And, number three?
They have to be muted because they're not here to learn from people who are well established like us!
Thanks,
Rivky
