Rapid Eye Movement
The title is REM but this wont allow caps as a title2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a flashing light that brought a sensational bright dream quickly to our eyes before it disappeared, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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This sounds like a flashing light that brought a sensational bright dream quickly to our eyes before it disappeared, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the review. I had a similar idea when writing this.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. I like the unique picture you paired with your poem. You give readers much to think about. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Your contest entry is in good form. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. I like the unique picture you paired with your poem. You give readers much to think about. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Thanks. I enjoyed writing this little piece.
