Just Jim
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Kidnapping"Lonely woman meets wrong man.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
It's been a while. As before--Delicious snark. The pervert rub-a-dubbing his dick is priceless--I choked on my chocolate bar!
Sugg: character list. And backstory for context.
scrapping=>SCRAPING pepperoni off the walls."
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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It's been a while. As before--Delicious snark. The pervert rub-a-dubbing his dick is priceless--I choked on my chocolate bar!
Sugg: character list. And backstory for context.
scrapping=>SCRAPING pepperoni off the walls."
Comment Written 04-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the suggestion. This is a lark...a fun way to distract myself from. Reality. Happy 4th of July.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Lill, this is just too funny. It is a great story, which develops purely through dialogue. and it does so very well. I really liked it and it's so well written. Ulla':)))
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Hi Lill, this is just too funny. It is a great story, which develops purely through dialogue. and it does so very well. I really liked it and it's so well written. Ulla':)))
Comment Written 04-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thanks much. We writers journey on.
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So true
