Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I've never seen such a beautiful sunset before, with that purple color. Your words and image match perfectly, I think this will do well in the contest. Best of luck. :)

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Boogienights,

Oh thank you for this superb review and kind comments. Also for the well wishes:-)

I really appreciate your time to assess my work.

Take care, Boogienights.

Senyai

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Boogienights,

Oh thank you for this superb review and kind comments. Also for the well wishes:-)

I really appreciate your time to assess my work.

Take care, Boogienights.

Senyai

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Twilight is a special time of the day, it seemed to come with its own special kind of hush, and I've noticed that it seems commonly calm at this time, perhaps imagination, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Roy,
Yes twilight holds the evening calm and I love this time of day. Reflective time as the day closes. Thanks for another superb review Roy.

Take care my Australian friend :-)

Senyai

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Roy,
Yes twilight holds the evening calm and I love this time of day. Reflective time as the day closes. Thanks for another superb review Roy.

Take care my Australian friend :-)

Senyai

reply by royowen on 07-Jul-2021

I agree

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

"Sunset". What a very nice Lune poem contest entry. The Illustration that you have chosen, does well to increase the significance of your words. You say a great deal in just a very small "space". This is to be admired. Best wishes.

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Victor,

Thank you so much for a superb review! Your time is much appreciated :-)

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Victor,

Thank you so much for a superb review! Your time is much appreciated :-)

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made effective use of your thirteen syllables in this lovely, vividly descriptive lune. Sunsets--and sunrises--are so lovely to watch, in addition to being such powerful symbols in life.

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Janice,

What a lovely review! Thank you for your sweet comments and your time to assess my work!

Take care,
Senyai

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Janice,

What a lovely review! Thank you for your sweet comments and your time to assess my work!

Take care,
Senyai

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely image and
nice presentation, Senyai.
-Thanks for the notes.
-You wrote a very good lune
that meets all of the requirements.
-A good topic with effective imagery with
"soft purple hues."
-Good luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Pam,

Another superb review by you! Thanks so much? also for the well wishes:-)

Take care,
Senyai

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Pam,

Another superb review by you! Thanks so much? also for the well wishes:-)

Take care,
Senyai

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Jul-2021

You are very welcome, Senyai.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

hi Senyai !

A very nice Lune contest entry. You wrote a colorful poem about space and time. Thanks for the explanation for your poem title - quite a mouthful for a much shorter English word. (-;

Mark

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Mark,

I know 😉 Thank you for a superb review and comments! Much appreciate your time to assess my wirk :-)

Take care my friend,
Senyai

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Mark,

I know 😉 Thank you for a superb review and comments! Much appreciate your time to assess my wirk :-)

Take care my friend,
Senyai

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your beautiful picture plus words to match. Your words are well chosen with the correct syllables per line. Your words create great imagery. Thanks for the notes. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi Jan,

Oh thank you so much for such a super review and kind thoughts. Your reviews are always so welcome.

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Wow. I would consider this a perfect lune.
It flows flawlessly and you even got in a rhyme!
I'm our of sixes, so accept a virtual one.
Just stunning!
I have a good feeling about this one.
Katiemae

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Hi KatieMae,

Oh thank you so much for your kind words and super review. I am honored by them. KatieMae, you should try a Lune, or have you already? I love your work and look forward to reading your latest.

Your Nyx poem was so descriptive, it gave me positive chills, lol.

Have a great week!
Senyai

reply by Katie Mae Dead on 07-Jul-2021

You are most welcome. I've written a line before but it's been awhile. Just posted a haiku a few moments ago if your interested.
Katiemae

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Oh yes! When I get home I?ll be glad to read :-)