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Naturally You

A 5-7-5 Poem

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Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful poem and a very romantic one. I like that you also expressed qualities of her character as well as her beauty. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021

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    Thank you for this wonderful review
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written romance poem. It has a Beautiful overall presentation. Artwork goes nicely with your words. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The perfect girl full of beauty and honesty described here and I enjoyed your romantic 5-7-5, this girl is every boy's dream girl, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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There's pure beauty in this poem. If you are honest, you'll capture pure love inside and outside. Beauty comes from the heart. If you are kind, it will show wherever you go....

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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Comment from Anne Johnston
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"you are love's desire
pure of mind honest of heart
untainted beauty."
I like your picture and the words you have chosen to illustrate. God made women beautiful, and we do not need the glitter and glamour that the world would try to add.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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    Thank you very much
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    You are welcome
Comment from Bonnie Seach
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A fine accompanying picture. The poem is contest compliant. It is emotive and sensitive.
It gives me the feeling of a ballerina about to perform a romantic classic dance. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes at the booths

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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reply by Bonnie Seach on 03-Jul-2021
    ✋👆🤗🌹
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Your poem definition gets love on a pedestal that is equal to undeniable and unreachable. The beauty's there but the closeness it's unattainable because perfection stays above mortals desires.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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Comment from siais
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"pure of mind honest of heart"

Untainted Beauty and a Beautiful heart will always be full of love, Thanks for sharing the sweet poem, take care dear!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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Comment from Senyai
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Hi Anon,

I love this! Such a beautiful description of a one in a million lover,

"pure of mind honest of heart"

Really lovely choice of words. Your brevity of words lends much to this little gem of a 5-7-5 Romance poem. Photo chosen enhanced your work nicely.

Best to you in the contest
Happy 4th!
Senyai

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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    Thank you very much