Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Impossible"multi-author book number two
9 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Debra.
-A good topic and description,
along with the syllable count.
-I like the message in your poem
about how the "soul remembers."
-Hopefully, it is the good things
and the things we learned from.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Debra.
-A good topic and description,
along with the syllable count.
-I like the message in your poem
about how the "soul remembers."
-Hopefully, it is the good things
and the things we learned from.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Hello Pam :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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You are welcome, Debra.
Comment from Aussie
Great illustration for your Impossible. The soul forgets nothing; memories are often forgotten as we age or don't wish to remember events that upset our character. Well done K xx
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Great illustration for your Impossible. The soul forgets nothing; memories are often forgotten as we age or don't wish to remember events that upset our character. Well done K xx
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Hello K :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That inner voice that brings a chill from the past and into the present it stays with us to haunt and threaten, a poignant write Debra, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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That inner voice that brings a chill from the past and into the present it stays with us to haunt and threaten, a poignant write Debra, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Hello Dolly :)
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Gloria ....
How great to see you again, Debra. Even though it hasn't been that long it seems like an age.
This is a fine contribution to the Renga book as it lends a rich texture of depth.
Always great to read and review your work. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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How great to see you again, Debra. Even though it hasn't been that long it seems like an age.
This is a fine contribution to the Renga book as it lends a rich texture of depth.
Always great to read and review your work. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Hello Gloria :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
It was so nice to have the opportunity to write a little something. This has been a busy term in school so far, but I'm now on the three week countdown to the summer holidays! Looking forward to having some time to write :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from royowen
Sometimes hidden in the depths of our minds are things of significance from our past, and you've brilliantly pointed that out to us, they can come back when we remember, beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Sometimes hidden in the depths of our minds are things of significance from our past, and you've brilliantly pointed that out to us, they can come back when we remember, beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hello Roy :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Most welcome Debra
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It's hard to forget that which the soul remembers. These words are so true. Nice photo to compliment your words as well.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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This is a nicely written poem. It's hard to forget that which the soul remembers. These words are so true. Nice photo to compliment your words as well.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hello Joanne,
Thank you for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Debra! So good to see you back writing again!
I like your deep renga entry with the two lines about memory - that which affects the mind and the soul, and even the body sometimes "remembers" things the mind wants to forget.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hi Debra! So good to see you back writing again!
I like your deep renga entry with the two lines about memory - that which affects the mind and the soul, and even the body sometimes "remembers" things the mind wants to forget.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hi Helen :)
Thank you so much for your insightful feedback.
It's nice to be able to write a little something!
Just 3 weeks left to go of the school term and then I will have some time on my hands again... for 6 weeks at least LOL
Best wishes to you as always, Debra x
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Wow, you're still in school? That's a long term. The end of a term is probably the busiest - lots of milestones to achieve - even for preschoolers! 🌷😊💖
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We break up for the summer on 23rd July and recommence on 8th September. I'm ready for the break! You're right, these last few days are manic! x
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
It's been a while--hope all is well--you came back with a bang--this is an intriguing paradoxical piece--well done in two lines--too bad you didn't put it in the recent contest. Nice to see you!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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It's been a while--hope all is well--you came back with a bang--this is an intriguing paradoxical piece--well done in two lines--too bad you didn't put it in the recent contest. Nice to see you!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hi Liz :) Thank you for your kind feedback - it's lovely to have been kinda missed! I have 3 weeks to go of this term in school and then I'll have 6 weeks holidays, so I should find my way here more often than of late :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
You have composed a beautiful piece here for the book of Japanese poetry. The art was the crowing gem to your fine contribution. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs...
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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You have composed a beautiful piece here for the book of Japanese poetry. The art was the crowing gem to your fine contribution. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs...
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Sal :) I appreciate your lovely feedback!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
