Lullabies in the Breeze
8 Word poem18 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
Congratulations on your win! It was a beautiful eight words with a built beautiful illustration. Although I was entered in the contest, I didn't come close to getting the votes that you did, and deserved. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Congratulations on your win! It was a beautiful eight words with a built beautiful illustration. Although I was entered in the contest, I didn't come close to getting the votes that you did, and deserved. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hello Victor. Thanks for the heartwarming comments ? they really encourage me! So glad you enjoyed it. :)
Melissa
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You are most welcome, sugar Ray.
Comment from Patty Palmer
That's very pretty. I like the idea of the breeze whispering lullabies. Sounds very peaceful and calm. I'd like to be there in this picture. Calm, cool, and collected. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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That's very pretty. I like the idea of the breeze whispering lullabies. Sounds very peaceful and calm. I'd like to be there in this picture. Calm, cool, and collected. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, Patty!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient write as the night's gentle breeze sings to us here, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, you created an atmosphere here with just 8 words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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An ambient write as the night's gentle breeze sings to us here, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, you created an atmosphere here with just 8 words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, Dolly!!
Comment from AliMom
Lovely use of personification. I can almost hear the sounds. To think of them as lullabies adds a dimension of musicality you don't often consider when listening to leaves. A very nice entry, It resonates with the season and the secret melodies produced. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Lovely use of personification. I can almost hear the sounds. To think of them as lullabies adds a dimension of musicality you don't often consider when listening to leaves. A very nice entry, It resonates with the season and the secret melodies produced. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from karenina
I perused all of the contest entries... This one spoke to me in a soothing way. I'm guessing we all have an inner child longing for the serenity of a lullaby... Very nice! I hope you ace this contest!--Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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I perused all of the contest entries... This one spoke to me in a soothing way. I'm guessing we all have an inner child longing for the serenity of a lullaby... Very nice! I hope you ace this contest!--Karenina
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much, Karenina!!!
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Guess you know who I voted for... but I DON'T know who I voted for anonymous person!---Karenina
Comment from natalie johnson
Very angelic.
Such a complex story can be told in such a calm and yet moving moment.
A well written little piece.
It is a great entry poem. I think you got your point across quite well and poetically.
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Very angelic.
Such a complex story can be told in such a calm and yet moving moment.
A well written little piece.
It is a great entry poem. I think you got your point across quite well and poetically.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Night breezes whisper lullabies in summer's rustling leaves." What expressive words for the this contest. Beautiful picture to illustrate, makes one want to be there in that setting, resting quietly.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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"Night breezes whisper lullabies in summer's rustling leaves." What expressive words for the this contest. Beautiful picture to illustrate, makes one want to be there in that setting, resting quietly.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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HI Anne. Thanks so much, my friend.
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You are welcome
Comment from ShirleyT1
Your words create a beautiful image in my mind as I read and meditate on them. Reminds me of an cool summer evening with a gentle breeze blowing through the tree. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Your words create a beautiful image in my mind as I read and meditate on them. Reminds me of an cool summer evening with a gentle breeze blowing through the tree. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much, Shirley.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A succinct, well composed eight word poem that creates a vivid image of night time lullabies.
The chosen artwork works well with the piece.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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A succinct, well composed eight word poem that creates a vivid image of night time lullabies.
The chosen artwork works well with the piece.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the personification of the breeze. the image is a good pairing with your 8 well thought out words. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the personification of the breeze. the image is a good pairing with your 8 well thought out words. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much, Jan!
