No Man's Land
Dangerous Path8 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a good story for the contest because in a few words you led us to believe this was a sniper involved in a war zone. Then with one last sentence, we learn it was gamer. I love surprise ending.
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This is a good story for the contest because in a few words you led us to believe this was a sniper involved in a war zone. Then with one last sentence, we learn it was gamer. I love surprise ending.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Kill or be killed and war is a game of chance and your story is profound and chilling here, a futile loss of young lives in this short story of the killing fields, love Dolly x
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Kill or be killed and war is a game of chance and your story is profound and chilling here, a futile loss of young lives in this short story of the killing fields, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from karenina
SO clever! Of course, of COURSE I was running in the opposite direction!
Sharp, cutting, decisive misdirection with a social commentary that enrages and cured the rage at the same time... Scary good. Really.
Winner? MAY BE!
Karenina
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SO clever! Of course, of COURSE I was running in the opposite direction!
Sharp, cutting, decisive misdirection with a social commentary that enrages and cured the rage at the same time... Scary good. Really.
Winner? MAY BE!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Wendy G
Thank goodness it was just a game. Although personally I don't like games that simulate killing. Your story is well written and your image very appropriate. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank goodness it was just a game. Although personally I don't like games that simulate killing. Your story is well written and your image very appropriate. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. Being a gamer myself I can tell you there aren't many around that don't show killing, some in worse forms than others.
Comment from lancellot
Well, that is what happens in games when you spend too much time on offence and forget about your defense. A snipper must always be on the move in between shots. Your shooter did not move and was therefore easy to track. Rookie mistake.
A strong entry for gamers. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Well, that is what happens in games when you spend too much time on offence and forget about your defense. A snipper must always be on the move in between shots. Your shooter did not move and was therefore easy to track. Rookie mistake.
A strong entry for gamers. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. That's why he has a second chance, and a third and a ...
Comment from Leann DS
Well, well, well... I totally did not expect that! LOL great job! Well written story with only a few words. Interesting and love the surprise ending. Thank you for sharing. Have a great week!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Well, well, well... I totally did not expect that! LOL great job! Well written story with only a few words. Interesting and love the surprise ending. Thank you for sharing. Have a great week!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Begin Again
Darn those games...they are programmed to be smarter than the average guy, I guess. the sniper was on top of his game and then he was not! Well done! Have a great day!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Darn those games...they are programmed to be smarter than the average guy, I guess. the sniper was on top of his game and then he was not! Well done! Have a great day!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Try as I might the game always wins. Damnit lol. Thanks for your review
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Lol. Great entry. Superb twist at the end. I really like it because I have sons and grandsons who play video games constantly. Well do and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Lol. Great entry. Superb twist at the end. I really like it because I have sons and grandsons who play video games constantly. Well do and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. Those games can be addictive, trust me!!
