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Ladybug Basks

A contemporary insect haiku

10 total reviews 
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is really a good one, June. Those aphids on the run made me smile, because they are quite the yummy snack for a ladybug.

Excellent haiku, and fine contribution to the club.

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this fun piece! These are the cutest exterminators with their polka dotted outfits. Aphids beware!
Comment from RGstar
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Lovely June. Once again, I always like reading these pieces of yours...somehow so refreshing.

''aphids on the run''

I just love that little sentiment in conjunction with all.
Bravo.
Have a great day,
RG

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
    Thank you so much! It was a fun challenge.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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June,

If it was not already summer today, this would be a great reminder of nature in your month name! Lots of nice entries in Gypsy's club contest.

Have not composed one to be considered.

Mark

Mark

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    Thank you, Mark!
Comment from Aussie
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Loved the photo and your poem. Thank goodness for Lady Bugs. Behind every critter that chews on our beautiful plants, another predator follows the path to their next meal!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
    I?m happy you enjoyed this fun little piece. Besides bring cute, ladybirds serve an important purpose in our gardens. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Ladybug Basks
by June Sargent

Hello, June,

Thank you for participating in our haiku club... I love your entry. It's the second ladybug haiku in this event...they are so cute. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Excellent presentation. Well done!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    So happy you enjoyed this insect haiku - thanks for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. It was a fun challenge.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Fellow Gardener!
You know your lady bugs and aphids well, my friend!
Delightful offering that certainly resonates with me and made me smile as I read it!

Thank you!
diane

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    So happy you enjoyed this insect haiku - thanks for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from equestrik
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I love the simplicity and beauty of this presentation. Your picture is a beauty and your words tell the life of a ladybug pretty precisely. It is well done and I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    So happy you enjoyed this insect haiku - thanks for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from RodG
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I have not seen any ladybugs this spring. Your haiku paints a scenic picture of one "basking" on the petals of a flower. I especially like your use of rhyme. Rod

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    Thanks for sharing your insights. Glad you enjoyed this fun little haiku!
reply by RodG on 20-Jun-2021
    My pleasure.
Comment from tfawcus
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It's good to have a few beneficial insects in the garden to combat the nasties. So much better than insecticides. Your little ladybird has earned her rest in the sunshine! Your haiku speaks of a natural balance in nature.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    Thanks for sharing your insights. Glad you enjoyed this fun little haiku!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your fun haiku that has a serious message with it, June. Good job with its style. The picture is supportive, though your words paint their own picture. I like how you included two kind of insects in one haiku, the use of rhyme is good, and your overall presentation is, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
    Thanks for sharing your insights. Glad you enjoyed this fun little haiku!