Fools Rush In
Stop!!6 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
Well done, I find these contests very hard to do but you have done a great job. You're right of course, we need to take a deep breath and watch what we say. Best of luck in the contest. :)
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Well done, I find these contests very hard to do but you have done a great job. You're right of course, we need to take a deep breath and watch what we say. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
presentation.
-Good choice of antonyms,
and you have good
description for each.
-"Stop" is effective and
gets the reader to do just that!
-Then, you have the green light
to "Start"!
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Good artwork and
presentation.
-Good choice of antonyms,
and you have good
description for each.
-"Stop" is effective and
gets the reader to do just that!
-Then, you have the green light
to "Start"!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry gives readers a great message. I like the choices of words used to build your poem. I like the end rhymes used. Your lines read smooth with a clear message to all.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry gives readers a great message. I like the choices of words used to build your poem. I like the end rhymes used. Your lines read smooth with a clear message to all.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
Comment from ShirleyT1
I love it, both the Antonym Poem and the visual. What a great warning not to be a fool and rush making decisions or choices. You have written such a big message in so few words!
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I love it, both the Antonym Poem and the visual. What a great warning not to be a fool and rush making decisions or choices. You have written such a big message in so few words!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
Comment from pome lover
I'm not sure what situation you were thinking of when you wrote this, or if you meant in general, but yes, thoughtful action is certainly preferable to action jumped into before considering the results.
But, there is also time for positive action. And if there ever was a time, the time is now before this country goes down the tubes.
Just my (opinion and) reaction to your poem, considering what's going on today- America being destroyed from within.
Katharine - pome lover
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I'm not sure what situation you were thinking of when you wrote this, or if you meant in general, but yes, thoughtful action is certainly preferable to action jumped into before considering the results.
But, there is also time for positive action. And if there ever was a time, the time is now before this country goes down the tubes.
Just my (opinion and) reaction to your poem, considering what's going on today- America being destroyed from within.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
Comment from Pantygynt
You get your antonyms in at the beginning and end, and you have also managed a rhyme in the centre section. It is always good to see someone using a poetic device in these short forms. Many forget that these should be poems and that means poetic devices.
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You get your antonyms in at the beginning and end, and you have also managed a rhyme in the centre section. It is always good to see someone using a poetic device in these short forms. Many forget that these should be poems and that means poetic devices.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
