Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Wild Wind of Love"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
40 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review, I'm happy that you like it. The photo of the grass in our field being blown by the wind just seemed to fit.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Gudbjorg.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective imagery, rhyme,
and alliteration.
-You show your joy of the wind
"that sets your spirit free."
-I like the repetition and the
concluding verse with the
"whirlwind of love."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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-Nice image and
presentation, Gudbjorg.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective imagery, rhyme,
and alliteration.
-You show your joy of the wind
"that sets your spirit free."
-I like the repetition and the
concluding verse with the
"whirlwind of love."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review of my poem. Your comments are so encouraging and much appreciated!
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You are very welcome. I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
It is a beautiful feeling of having the fresh gentle wind on your face. I enjoyed your poem on wind. The repetition of the first line in the 3 stanzas imparts power to the poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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It is a beautiful feeling of having the fresh gentle wind on your face. I enjoyed your poem on wind. The repetition of the first line in the 3 stanzas imparts power to the poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Your comment about the "fresh gentle wind on your face" is delightful. Thank you, too, for your encouragement.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The wind blows away the cobwebs and the germs and viruses, but I prefer a gentle breeze to a wild wind which can cause havoc, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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The wind blows away the cobwebs and the germs and viruses, but I prefer a gentle breeze to a wild wind which can cause havoc, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I especially liked what you wrote about "the germs and viruses" that the wind blows away. So true in the physical and spiritual, too.
Comment from amahra
Very beautiful poem about the wind. I've always felt that way about great bodies of water. The wind is a mystery and you tell it very well in your writing. You're right about the wind being like the Spirit of God.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Very beautiful poem about the wind. I've always felt that way about great bodies of water. The wind is a mystery and you tell it very well in your writing. You're right about the wind being like the Spirit of God.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your insightful review. I think all of God?s creation has so much to speak to us about His love and freedom.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Wild Wind of Love', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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'Wild Wind of Love', is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I am humbled by your commendations, as I write what comes to my mind or what is laid on my heart.
You deserved the wonderful review. It was a pleasure to read and review your work.
Comment from equestrik
I like your picture choice in this presentaion for the 'Nature's Breath' writing prompt. I gererally like the wind as well. All the best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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I like your picture choice in this presentaion for the 'Nature's Breath' writing prompt. I gererally like the wind as well. All the best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem and for your encouragement. I always loved the wind on my face when I was riding--especially in the Highlands.
Comment from Senyai
Hi,
This is such a joyful poem that I instantly felt a connection and wanted to dance with you in the whirlwind! Yes, wind is playful and freeing as we can feel it in our hair, on our skin as it caresses. But it can turn in an flash and bring destruction.
I enjoyed the playful mirth expressed here.
Good luck in the contest!
Senyai
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Hi,
This is such a joyful poem that I instantly felt a connection and wanted to dance with you in the whirlwind! Yes, wind is playful and freeing as we can feel it in our hair, on our skin as it caresses. But it can turn in an flash and bring destruction.
I enjoyed the playful mirth expressed here.
Good luck in the contest!
Senyai
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and your comments about the wind. They?re so true! There?s just something special in the freedom of the wind--all the more so, because it?s invisible itself and can only be seen in what it touches.
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Sorry about the question marks. There seems to be a glitch in my laptop.
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The glitch is universal on FanStory. It does the question mark things on mine too. Very annoying :-)
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very nice contest entry. I too love the wind and how it feels on my skin, it's mysterious and unseen...that's part of the fascination. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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This is a very nice contest entry. I too love the wind and how it feels on my skin, it's mysterious and unseen...that's part of the fascination. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. It's so true how it's both mysterious and unseen and that being part of its fascination. It can have quite a dramatic effect on anything it touches, though.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good answer to the prompt. The repetition gets your point across of your love for nature or that love is like the wind.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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This is a good answer to the prompt. The repetition gets your point across of your love for nature or that love is like the wind.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for reviewing my poem and for your encouragement. I think not being locked down helps keep us healthy!
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You are most kindly welcome.
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