Comment from pharp

Excellent

Mystery Poet,

You did an outstanding job in the penning of this beautiful poem. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow. A most enjoyable read; the very best to you in the contest.

I am truly sorry for your loss.

Blessings...Portia

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2021

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Sweet story--I envy you your happy marriage. Heads up--you classified it as a script--it's really a poem--I'm not sure if it matters for the contest--you can easily change category from script to story, which would be preferable. (can't easily change to poem).

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2021

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

Now this is a great poem. How true we find love and have children and time rolls by but our love still grows then one day it's all over. That is the saddest part. Great writer you are. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2021

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Beautiful, the way you have described your love right from the start, and you passed that love to the next generations, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2021