Acrostic Poetry Contest
An entry for this one18 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Acrostic Poetry Contest
by Chrissy710
Interesting acrostic poem... it's very helpful for those who are learning the acrostic form. You incorporated each word in a way that makes sense and flows well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
Acrostic Poetry Contest
by Chrissy710
Interesting acrostic poem... it's very helpful for those who are learning the acrostic form. You incorporated each word in a way that makes sense and flows well. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Hi Gypsy Thanks for your review I thought this may meet the mark this time Chees for you good luck too Chris x
Comment from Sharon Davis
A clever and witty entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest.
A well composed and presented poem that flows well and is an enjoyable read.
Thanks for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
A clever and witty entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest.
A well composed and presented poem that flows well and is an enjoyable read.
Thanks for sharing your work.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Hi Sharon Thanks for looking in and giving me a review for my Acrostic I tried to do it justice without being to out there rewording
Cheers Chris
Comment from Boogienights
I have to give this 6 stars for how clever and original it is. I would never have thought of taking the contest prompt and incorporating it into the poem. Well done, best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
I have to give this 6 stars for how clever and original it is. I would never have thought of taking the contest prompt and incorporating it into the poem. Well done, best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Hi Boogie Nights Thanks for reading and reviewing my Acrostic effort and for you generous six stars . original I hope always many Thanks for your best of luck
Cheers Chris
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Christine.
Outstanding job of complying with the acrostic style and for having it make sense in the read. It's easy to mechanically do the style but getting the writing to read well and make sense. Well Done, and good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
Hello Christine.
Outstanding job of complying with the acrostic style and for having it make sense in the read. It's easy to mechanically do the style but getting the writing to read well and make sense. Well Done, and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Hi Robert Thank you for your great. Review and six stat award I am pleased to have your comments and best wishes
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy--wry humor about the requirements of the contest--regarding which I hope to be back with congrats. Masterful incorporation of requisite letters!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
Charming whimsy--wry humor about the requirements of the contest--regarding which I hope to be back with congrats. Masterful incorporation of requisite letters!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Hi Elizabeth Thanks you for your review and yes I always try for something a bit different I do have a very wry humour lol
Cheers Christine
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are creative, clear, interesting and descriptive.
I enjoyed the read of this colorful poem! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
The author's words are creative, clear, interesting and descriptive.
I enjoyed the read of this colorful poem! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Hi Harmony13 Thank you for reviewing my entry for this contest I had a bit of fun putting it together and also loved the image too. Cheers Christine
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a truly excellent acrostic poem: logically flowing--unlike some acrostics I read that are mere lists--and descriptive, defining the style of poetry in detail.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
This is a truly excellent acrostic poem: logically flowing--unlike some acrostics I read that are mere lists--and descriptive, defining the style of poetry in detail.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Hi Janice Thanks for your review and lovely comments I had hoped it would work, always ready to something a bit left field lol
Cheers Chris
Comment from aryr
Good luck with the Acrostic Poetry Contest, Christine. The picture was lovely and it seemed perfect for your words. I really enjoyed this. It seemed to lay out a plan for one's interpretation of the requirement of such a poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
Good luck with the Acrostic Poetry Contest, Christine. The picture was lovely and it seemed perfect for your words. I really enjoyed this. It seemed to lay out a plan for one's interpretation of the requirement of such a poem. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Hi Allie Thanks so much and as you know me I will try something a bit out of the square can?t help myself lol
Perhaps it may do OK wait and see although I enjoyed working with the letters
Cheers and hugs Chris
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MMmmm I think it must be all the science and medical stuff that is crammed in our brains. Sometimes we have to think outside the regular box and our minds love a challenge. You are so welcome, Christine.
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Ha Ha your are not wrong
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LOL. Hugs and smiles.
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LOL. Hugs and smiles.
Comment from royowen
I've noticed the clever way you have made the poetic narrative as one complete phase, and cleverly woven in all the chosen acrostic statement in the narrative, very clever, and a lesson in the correct way to write an acrostic without deviating, well done Chris, good job, and good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
I've noticed the clever way you have made the poetic narrative as one complete phase, and cleverly woven in all the chosen acrostic statement in the narrative, very clever, and a lesson in the correct way to write an acrostic without deviating, well done Chris, good job, and good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Hi Roy oh you are a gem for giving me a six for this I had fun thinking this one up but once I started it just seemed to happen Thats what I love about writing poetry I never know what any of my poems will be until the last line is complete I never pre think anything always on the spot lol
As always Cheers And hugs Chris
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I?d have to say, me too, I love seeing what comes up, I?m very rarely stumped, even though I don?t know where it?s going, I wrote two verses after a dear friend?s wife passed away on Sunday night, after talking to her that day, full of life and verve. I finished it today in a different meter, fascinating what came out, it?s a tribute, I?ll post it in a couple of days. It?s called ?Rosy?s song? her mum is 97, smuggled bibles into China,
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Did you mean (Submitted) in the penultimate line Christine? A poignant write about the contest process and the critiques that may follow, ha ha ha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
Did you mean (Submitted) in the penultimate line Christine? A poignant write about the contest process and the critiques that may follow, ha ha ha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Hi Dolly thank you and yes i did mean submitted and have corrected this mistake Glad you get my sense of humour I had fun with this one but it did make me think lol
Cheers Chrisxx