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Great fun when schools are closed by a winter storm.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Cat Merto
Nice photo, nice poem although it was hard to understand the Trinet
Line format
But this is a new writing prompt for me
All in all the kids enjoyed a snow day with snow balls and hot cocoa
Good day when I was young
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond. What do you think is needed to make this effort worthy of five stars?
reply by Cat Merto on 16-Jun-2021
Comment from
Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a sweet poem, incorporating the specifications of the Trinet format as well as reminders of many key aspects of snow days that children love.
One error:
snow angles,
-->
snow angels,
You found a great picture to go with your poem!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
Thanks for the catch. Appreciate your time to read and respond.
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 17-Jun-2021
You're very welcome. I hope you do well in the contest. May God bless you. - Mary Kay
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