Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Bountiful Bubbles"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
What a beautifully composed free verse poem on bubbles. A brilliant take on the theme! Very impressive imagery--four stunning scenarios-I might add that happiness is like a rising bubble. Never know when it will pop! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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What a beautifully composed free verse poem on bubbles. A brilliant take on the theme! Very impressive imagery--four stunning scenarios-I might add that happiness is like a rising bubble. Never know when it will pop! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your validation on this free verse. 🙏
Comment from Senyai
Hi JLR,
This is a most descriptive poem! I felt like I was there, sitting with you by the waterfall cascading down, roaring into the water creating bubbles and they jot back up to become water as rain to fill the streams and clouds, and on and in it goes. While reading, I caught myself smelling the water mist and felt the spray on my face, smelled the damp fertile ground.
Most enjoyable little trip and a welcome "science lesson". Total Recall... I just had a virtual vacation :-)
One small typo perhaps? "ever-downward jounrey in the mountain stream." - journey?
Have a great week,
Senyai
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Hi JLR,
This is a most descriptive poem! I felt like I was there, sitting with you by the waterfall cascading down, roaring into the water creating bubbles and they jot back up to become water as rain to fill the streams and clouds, and on and in it goes. While reading, I caught myself smelling the water mist and felt the spray on my face, smelled the damp fertile ground.
Most enjoyable little trip and a welcome "science lesson". Total Recall... I just had a virtual vacation :-)
One small typo perhaps? "ever-downward jounrey in the mountain stream." - journey?
Have a great week,
Senyai
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Senyai ? thank you for your review and comments and the spelling catch.👌🙏
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant take on the theme! Stunning imagery--four stunning scenarios--the first one is indeed evocative of childhood fun--the others are scenes I never attended to--and clearly should have! Glorious!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Brilliant take on the theme! Stunning imagery--four stunning scenarios--the first one is indeed evocative of childhood fun--the others are scenes I never attended to--and clearly should have! Glorious!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Ekizabeth, thank you for your review and comments.❤️🙏
Comment from Eunice Amero
This is so true. I used to love blowing bubbles. To watch them float away. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best. I enjoyed it. Hope you win.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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This is so true. I used to love blowing bubbles. To watch them float away. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best. I enjoyed it. Hope you win.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Eunice, thanks for taking the time read and comment on my free verse submission. 🙏🙏🎶🎶
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you are more than welcome.
Comment from royowen
Such a wonderfully composed free verse, a glorious ode to the wonder of rainbow embalmed bubbles, all floating imperiously above the earth, for the enjoyment of all that behold these wonders of floatation. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Such a wonderfully composed free verse, a glorious ode to the wonder of rainbow embalmed bubbles, all floating imperiously above the earth, for the enjoyment of all that behold these wonders of floatation. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thank you kind sir, for reading and commenting on my free verse submission. 🙏🙏🎶🎶
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Well done
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What a very nice poem and the memories it brings...I loved those bubble bottles and watching the bubbles rise into the sky, some popping and others floating to heaven, I thought. Well-thought-out and a joy!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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What a very nice poem and the memories it brings...I loved those bubble bottles and watching the bubbles rise into the sky, some popping and others floating to heaven, I thought. Well-thought-out and a joy!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Sherry, smiling back at your youth filled memories- thanks for the review and comments.🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are having a lot of fun with bubbles in this free-write and I'm not sure I have seen bubbles in waterfalls before but this sounds like a bit of poetic licence, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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You are having a lot of fun with bubbles in this free-write and I'm not sure I have seen bubbles in waterfalls before but this sounds like a bit of poetic licence, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Hi Dolly, thanks for your read and comment. I hope someday you will find that shady spot at the foot of a waterfall and capture the moments when the water reflects the bubbles, beneath the surface, rising onto the crest of waves as they surface from the long cascading fall from the height above you. 🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Boogienights
Its a circle in the life of bubbles...a great concept. I loved bubbles when I was a kid and my children loved them as well. I never thought of them being a part of a bigger picture though...it's delightful. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Its a circle in the life of bubbles...a great concept. I loved bubbles when I was a kid and my children loved them as well. I never thought of them being a part of a bigger picture though...it's delightful. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
You are very observant. From simple bubbles of air, it finally becomes rain and the process goes on and on. How great is our God who created all these small but beautiful things absolutely necessary for life. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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You are very observant. From simple bubbles of air, it finally becomes rain and the process goes on and on. How great is our God who created all these small but beautiful things absolutely necessary for life. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Kitbok, I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from lyenochka
What a wonderful journey you took us in your free verse about bubbles, starting with the childhood joy of soap bubbles to the joy of the bubbles of water throughout nature and the cycle of that water from the lakes and waterfalls to the skies and rain and back to the bubbles in the waterfalls. I really liked " ponder this morsel of
present moment experience"
Comments about the simple plural forms:
sweet fragrance of pine fill your flaring nostril's, (nostrils)
pushed by a gentle breeze, tiny bubble's, (bubbles)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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What a wonderful journey you took us in your free verse about bubbles, starting with the childhood joy of soap bubbles to the joy of the bubbles of water throughout nature and the cycle of that water from the lakes and waterfalls to the skies and rain and back to the bubbles in the waterfalls. I really liked " ponder this morsel of
present moment experience"
Comments about the simple plural forms:
sweet fragrance of pine fill your flaring nostril's, (nostrils)
pushed by a gentle breeze, tiny bubble's, (bubbles)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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Smiling back with a grateful heart🙏🙏
