Changing Gears
An Entwined poem22 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Well, I don't know much about the form, but I do know that your poem brought a smile to my face. I absolutely loved it.Yvonne, we've spent so many years being there for them all. Now is the time for us. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Well, I don't know much about the form, but I do know that your poem brought a smile to my face. I absolutely loved it.Yvonne, we've spent so many years being there for them all. Now is the time for us. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you. You're right. We must have some time for ourselves.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I've read several poems written in this style. Yours is truly excellent--skillfully written and creative. It also resonates with me, since it so well describes my mindset! :-)
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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I've read several poems written in this style. Yours is truly excellent--skillfully written and creative. It also resonates with me, since it so well describes my mindset! :-)
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Ahhh, a kindred soul. Thank you, Janice.
