Being a Parent
A life-long learning experience.3 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
An alphabet poem can be a challenge to pen and keep the story line meaningful.
You have chosen the message and experience of parenting and painted a great
picture of a supportive father sharing in the role. Your chosen key words from A-Z captures attention and follow through keeping in mind the flow of thought and sharing of experience, connecting with title & theme with realistic progression from beginning to the end of poetry. Your chosen art is an asset to your presentation. Well done and all the best!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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An alphabet poem can be a challenge to pen and keep the story line meaningful.
You have chosen the message and experience of parenting and painted a great
picture of a supportive father sharing in the role. Your chosen key words from A-Z captures attention and follow through keeping in mind the flow of thought and sharing of experience, connecting with title & theme with realistic progression from beginning to the end of poetry. Your chosen art is an asset to your presentation. Well done and all the best!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Parenting paves the foundations of family who are by our side for life and I adore my daughters who are my friends, a poignant Alphabet poem, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Parenting paves the foundations of family who are by our side for life and I adore my daughters who are my friends, a poignant Alphabet poem, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated. It is so nice when children are also friends.
Comment from blondie560
I'm sure this rings true for most parents. We wish for our children speak and learn to walk and when that is accomplished the next 25 years fly by. Sometimes you wonder how you survived or how they survived! But there comes that day where they ask for advice or want your help and the world feels right.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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I'm sure this rings true for most parents. We wish for our children speak and learn to walk and when that is accomplished the next 25 years fly by. Sometimes you wonder how you survived or how they survived! But there comes that day where they ask for advice or want your help and the world feels right.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated. It is fun to talk with them and look back over their growing years. We are lucky to have good, hard working children.
