Who's Laughing Now?
The Life of Practical Jokers...21 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
OH NO, YOU DID NOT! This is too funny. This is very bold and you have really stretched your imagination here, to come up with this crazy scenario. It's hard to imagine someone really doing this, but that's why it's called fiction! I think you have a winner for the contest.
I trust the funeral home was carpeted, so Sally didn't hurt herself when she fell down!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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OH NO, YOU DID NOT! This is too funny. This is very bold and you have really stretched your imagination here, to come up with this crazy scenario. It's hard to imagine someone really doing this, but that's why it's called fiction! I think you have a winner for the contest.
I trust the funeral home was carpeted, so Sally didn't hurt herself when she fell down!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
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HI, Mary Kay...Can't tell you where this story came from..it's quite diabolical and totally out of my realm of jokes... but suddenly it was there. Smiles, Carol
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SO FUNNY! It's good to let your creative brain go for a whirl! God bless you, my friend. Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
OMG, that was so funny, Carol, that is the type of joke that could give someone a heart attack! Lol. I'm sorry I didn't see this one and vote it really was a fabulous 'surprise' story. Well done, my friend. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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OMG, that was so funny, Carol, that is the type of joke that could give someone a heart attack! Lol. I'm sorry I didn't see this one and vote it really was a fabulous 'surprise' story. Well done, my friend. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. I appreciate it Sandra. Trying to catch up on all the posts since I slept the day away. It was odd to have 103 temp and a blanket on in 94 degree heat... I couldn't stop shivering. Tomorrow will be a better day so I am looking forward to that. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Eunice Amero
wow what a surprise that would be. That was a trick. short but I liked it. Thank you for sharing. I wish i could understand Fanstory more but I'm learning. Keep writing I liked this.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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wow what a surprise that would be. That was a trick. short but I liked it. Thank you for sharing. I wish i could understand Fanstory more but I'm learning. Keep writing I liked this.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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thanks Eunice...What do you wish you understood? Is there something I can help you with? Just drop me a message and I will try. Smiles, Carol
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Well thank you so much. I was wondering if you can send your stories outbto publishers ehether you send them here or not. I dont want to lose my rights do that the publishers wont take them. Thanks again
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant--if this doesn't win I'll be PISSED--I had to read it twice to get it--ingenious twist. You truly have a diabolical bent! I expect to be back with congrats.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Brilliant--if this doesn't win I'll be PISSED--I had to read it twice to get it--ingenious twist. You truly have a diabolical bent! I expect to be back with congrats.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much, Liz. You flattered me. I thought it was fun to write and you enjoyed it so we came out on top...not in the contest, but oh well. Smiles, Carol
Comment from papa55mike
That almost justifies first-degree murder in my house. We all know somebody like that. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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That almost justifies first-degree murder in my house. We all know somebody like that. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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I am afraid it would be a close run off in mine as well. I take things seriously so practical jokes (especially serious ones) aren't funny to me...too many tragedies so I think everything is real.
Thanks for the awesome review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
That would have to be the ultimate surprise and the ultimate practical joke!!
Your writing is clear and led up to the surprise really well. Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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That would have to be the ultimate surprise and the ultimate practical joke!!
Your writing is clear and led up to the surprise really well. Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thanks Wendy... Have no idea where this thought came from because I don't really care for practical jokes...usually someone gets upset. Guess that's why I write...to do things I wouldn't ever do in real life. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Zan Zan
OMG OMG JUST IMAGINE THIS.
My skin crawled just thinking about this scene...
(Spooky fact: While attending my cousin's funeral as a small girl in the 00s I could have sworn I saw his eyes open and shut. Quick enough that nobody believes me to this day. LOL
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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OMG OMG JUST IMAGINE THIS.
My skin crawled just thinking about this scene...
(Spooky fact: While attending my cousin's funeral as a small girl in the 00s I could have sworn I saw his eyes open and shut. Quick enough that nobody believes me to this day. LOL
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Spooky fact: I have a picture of my daughter standing in my mom's hospital room just before she died..... Only thing is...my daughter died four years before I took the picture.
Life is strange and I guess death is even stranger. Thanks for the review. Have a great day!
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a great story about practical jokers. I never approved of such jokes. My dad used to always play practical jokes on his friends, mostly on the telephone. Some became upset, others became angry. Your story is a perfect example. Sally fainted. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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This is a great story about practical jokers. I never approved of such jokes. My dad used to always play practical jokes on his friends, mostly on the telephone. Some became upset, others became angry. Your story is a perfect example. Sally fainted. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Lorraine, I so agree...I was never good at seeing or liking practical jokes though my family certainly was on April 1st. that's why I was glad it was just a silly story. have a great day an
d thank you for the review.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Ouch. Well, if she ends up dead, yes. It might have been a wee bit too much. But if she recovers, then I suppose all's well and everything's forgiven? hahahaha Some folks really will do anything for a laugh. Thanks!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Ouch. Well, if she ends up dead, yes. It might have been a wee bit too much. But if she recovers, then I suppose all's well and everything's forgiven? hahahaha Some folks really will do anything for a laugh. Thanks!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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I think her payback will be much worse...They've been at it for a long time...Me I'll skip the jokes...My family though thinks its cool on April 1st. Thanks for the kind review. have a great day!
Comment from equestrik
Oh man, Yes, too much! He wins for sute. This is a well written story succinct yet well told. You allowed a bit of suspence before the end even with so few words.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Oh man, Yes, too much! He wins for sute. This is a well written story succinct yet well told. You allowed a bit of suspence before the end even with so few words.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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To be honest, my muse must take all the credit for this short flash because I have no idea where it came from... It just popped into my brain and there it was. Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol
