Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Such A Long Journey"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Janet Foor
Lovely picture to enhance the words to your lovely poem. Life truly is like climbing a mountain and you have presented a creative piece of life with your free verse poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Lovely picture to enhance the words to your lovely poem. Life truly is like climbing a mountain and you have presented a creative piece of life with your free verse poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Janet, I am so appreciative of your words and comments, thank you!🙏
Comment from royowen
That's truly an amazing photo, but I can see where how it inspired you to write such an amazing piece of poetry, and an awe inspired work. This is beautifully written. Australia has very high mountain ranges, flattened by time and element I guess. Well done Jim. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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That's truly an amazing photo, but I can see where how it inspired you to write such an amazing piece of poetry, and an awe inspired work. This is beautifully written. Australia has very high mountain ranges, flattened by time and element I guess. Well done Jim. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you good Soul! I so value your review and comments, be well!🙏
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your philosophical poem which shows you as an avid mountain climber! There is a parallel to life in climbing mountains and the perspective it gives must be enthralling.
One minor suggestion - but it's up to you. It feels like the possessive.
with the 'morrows sunrise. ('morrow's -or even- tomorrow's)
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Enjoyed your philosophical poem which shows you as an avid mountain climber! There is a parallel to life in climbing mountains and the perspective it gives must be enthralling.
One minor suggestion - but it's up to you. It feels like the possessive.
with the 'morrows sunrise. ('morrow's -or even- tomorrow's)
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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lyenochka, as ever, I will I send gratitude forth for your review and comments. I appreciate you always and I have polished this up.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I really enjoyed this free-write with clever descriptions and I felt I was in this scene as I read your poem, I love mountains and live close to them and see the sun glinting on the rocks, and have always yearned to climb one, I did that in your poem here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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I really enjoyed this free-write with clever descriptions and I felt I was in this scene as I read your poem, I love mountains and live close to them and see the sun glinting on the rocks, and have always yearned to climb one, I did that in your poem here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Dolly, Thank you, as always, I will I send gratitude forth for your review and comments.🙏
Comment from equestrik
This entire presentation is lovely. Your picture is beautiful and your write and the way you compare it to your life is certainly thought provoking. All the best to you.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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This entire presentation is lovely. Your picture is beautiful and your write and the way you compare it to your life is certainly thought provoking. All the best to you.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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equestrik, It is I who so much value you and your taking time to read and review my offerings. Thank you! 🙏
