Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Leann.

This is quite a little interesting nonet poem for the contest. I like that phrase "fuchsia play doh heart." I have heard clay refuse to as a heart, but never play doh. It's a great metaphor.

Good verse and good luck in the contest.

Robert

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Thank you, Robert. I have my three grandchildren here in Pennsylvania from Kansas, and I have Play-Doh on the brain. :-) I appreciate you stopping by to read and review. Hugs.

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Thank you, Robert. I have my three grandchildren here in Pennsylvania from Kansas, and I have Play-Doh on the brain. :-) I appreciate you stopping by to read and review. Hugs.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your nonet contest entry is in good form. The syllables are correct per line. Your words are descriptive and well thought out. I like the way you explained the heart from beginning to end in this relationship. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Thank you. The topic was just on my mind. I appreciate your supportive comments and review.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I enjoyed your allegorical Nonet for the contest, dear Leann. I think Play-Doh is a great symbol for the human heart. As a child, that's pretty much the extent of my art. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Thanks for the review and comments! I guess I have playing on my mind because I have my three granddaughters with me. :-) Are you telling me you were unable to draw stick figures as a child? my stick figures were awesome. Hugs and blessings to you.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

OOOHHH! I am so glad it was just play-doh and not the real thing... but then no one could do that to your lovely heart.... I enjoyed the poem and as you can see the words went straight to my heart with sadness... Well done! Emotional chords struck! Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Oh, it's a real heart. Plato would be so much simpler though? totally struggling over here.
Thank you for your review and comments. Hugs and blessings and love.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very original and creative entry for the Nonet contest. You have incorporated all the aspects and qualities of Play-doh to describe the ill treatment you have received. Well done and good wishes for the contest.

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Thank you, Wendy. I appreciate your encouraging review and kind words. Hugs.