Ode to a Pickup
My relationship with trucks28 total reviews
Comment from Susan Newell
Very well said. I like the way you got so many brands and models in the poem. Life in the country is impossible without a truck. We've had several Ford Rangers and have been very happy with them. I heard they are making them again. I don't know why they ever stopped. Unless you have real need for a bigger truck, they are easier on gas, parking, etc. Our current one is a 2008 with only about 100,000 miles on it and has needed very little rust remediation, given the winter salt on the roads.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Very well said. I like the way you got so many brands and models in the poem. Life in the country is impossible without a truck. We've had several Ford Rangers and have been very happy with them. I heard they are making them again. I don't know why they ever stopped. Unless you have real need for a bigger truck, they are easier on gas, parking, etc. Our current one is a 2008 with only about 100,000 miles on it and has needed very little rust remediation, given the winter salt on the roads.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My relationship with trucks
Ode to a Pickup
Great entry for the "my truck" writing prompt contest. It's funny because it's so true. Nice rhyming. The presentation is cool.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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My relationship with trucks
Ode to a Pickup
Great entry for the "my truck" writing prompt contest. It's funny because it's so true. Nice rhyming. The presentation is cool.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Asante
I can't believe this poem made my day better! I was laughing at the rhyming and the last line "You're gonna be stuck like Chuck." You did a great job!
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I can't believe this poem made my day better! I was laughing at the rhyming and the last line "You're gonna be stuck like Chuck." You did a great job!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I have read several of these truck poems and so far, they have all pretty much made me smile. I liked the fact that he had owned so many different kinds but maybe come back to a favorite. Is an El Camino a truck? I thought it was actually classified as a car. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I have read several of these truck poems and so far, they have all pretty much made me smile. I liked the fact that he had owned so many different kinds but maybe come back to a favorite. Is an El Camino a truck? I thought it was actually classified as a car. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is a very Clever and fun poem that has alot to say. I enjoyed it very much. The descriptions are on point and paint a picture in the readers mind. Its true you need a pickup in some places.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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This is a very Clever and fun poem that has alot to say. I enjoyed it very much. The descriptions are on point and paint a picture in the readers mind. Its true you need a pickup in some places.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Xoxo
Comment from royowen
I remember with great fondness the F100 and F 150 fords, they were great workhorses, but to a young man they were heaven on wheels, perhaps more useful to the farmer, but what the heck? Beautifully written my friend, written articulately in no particular meter, with aabb rhyming, most enjoyable, good luck, blessings riy
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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I remember with great fondness the F100 and F 150 fords, they were great workhorses, but to a young man they were heaven on wheels, perhaps more useful to the farmer, but what the heck? Beautifully written my friend, written articulately in no particular meter, with aabb rhyming, most enjoyable, good luck, blessings riy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Well done
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Most welcome
Comment from Patty Palmer
My husband has owned a truck for over fifty years and he wouldn't accept anything but a Chevrolet He pays more attention to his truck than he does to me. Keep on truckin'!
Patty
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My husband has owned a truck for over fifty years and he wouldn't accept anything but a Chevrolet He pays more attention to his truck than he does to me. Keep on truckin'!
Patty
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much Patty. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Raul1
I think that you have a deep passion to drive and keep trucks for collection. This is good. I like your poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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I think that you have a deep passion to drive and keep trucks for collection. This is good. I like your poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You're welcome!
