Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I always look forward to your wisdom in verse, and these words do not disappoint. Living and sailing through life with a good heart gives you peace now and through eternity. Those who live in strife will sail on turbulent seas.
Regards
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Life is definitely like a boat journey. I like how you structured this poem. It's beautifully written. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A great message in this poem, raising awareness to our short time span in this lifetime - there is so much to do, to accomplish before go.

Loved these:

So soon earthly time is over,
when all your laughs and tears are done.
You will rest in peace by knowing,
that you gave all yourself and won.

You have to leave with peace and harmony indeed before we face eternity.

Thank you for sharing - this cuts deep.

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021