Living With A Gracious Heart
A fine way of living53 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Jaybird,
This is one of my favorites of your poems.
Smooth flow, rhyme and divine message.
I like you comparing life to a puzzle. Your title about having a grateful heart is key.
I probably would award this a 6 except you do have a spelling error in the following line:
"So soon earthly time is over,
when all your *laughts and tears are done"
(Laughs)
Thank you for continuing to share your gifts/s.
Anna
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Hi Jaybird,
This is one of my favorites of your poems.
Smooth flow, rhyme and divine message.
I like you comparing life to a puzzle. Your title about having a grateful heart is key.
I probably would award this a 6 except you do have a spelling error in the following line:
"So soon earthly time is over,
when all your *laughts and tears are done"
(Laughs)
Thank you for continuing to share your gifts/s.
Anna
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Living With A Gracious Heart
by jaybird1
Hello Mr Jay
Beautiful sonnet filled with wisdom on how to live life in peace and harmony. Good form and nice presentation.
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Living With A Gracious Heart
by jaybird1
Hello Mr Jay
Beautiful sonnet filled with wisdom on how to live life in peace and harmony. Good form and nice presentation.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from nomi338
I find your outlook on life and death a bit unique. Not bitter or jaded, just matter of fact. That is very refreshing. so many have, I think and unreal expectation of harps, wings, golden slippers and so on. I am not so sure.
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I find your outlook on life and death a bit unique. Not bitter or jaded, just matter of fact. That is very refreshing. so many have, I think and unreal expectation of harps, wings, golden slippers and so on. I am not so sure.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem gives reader much to think about. Your theme is well established, the rhymes are good, the flow is smooth, and the message is clear.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your poem gives reader much to think about. Your theme is well established, the rhymes are good, the flow is smooth, and the message is clear.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
That's the way to face the aging process. Just follow the way every day knowing you gave your best and when it comes to the end you will soar far and wide.
Patty
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That's the way to face the aging process. Just follow the way every day knowing you gave your best and when it comes to the end you will soar far and wide.
Patty
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from mermaids
Your message of peace comes through clearly in your words. Love your last verse about being forever free and sailing on. Your use of words gives a light feel and flow to your poem.
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Your message of peace comes through clearly in your words. Love your last verse about being forever free and sailing on. Your use of words gives a light feel and flow to your poem.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your poem. i found it very thought provoking. It sounds like you have lived a long life with very few regrets. All the best. Jen.
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. i found it very thought provoking. It sounds like you have lived a long life with very few regrets. All the best. Jen.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from A.L. Morrow
This made me tear up! So beautiful and well written, I love the melancholy yet spirited tone of this! Personally, i'm in a very confused place in my life as of now, and it's artwork of this nature that keeps me grounded, keeps my eye on the prize. Thank you so much for your contribution to the artistic world, you are exceptional! Also, you just earned yourself a fan! Keep it up!! <333
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This made me tear up! So beautiful and well written, I love the melancholy yet spirited tone of this! Personally, i'm in a very confused place in my life as of now, and it's artwork of this nature that keeps me grounded, keeps my eye on the prize. Thank you so much for your contribution to the artistic world, you are exceptional! Also, you just earned yourself a fan! Keep it up!! <333
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Lovely write - sweet and harmonious...when we are laid to rest there will be a better life - free of hate and war and all the social ills -- as well as our pain and ill health...I am waiting with a hopeful heart. Nice work as always
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Lovely write - sweet and harmonious...when we are laid to rest there will be a better life - free of hate and war and all the social ills -- as well as our pain and ill health...I am waiting with a hopeful heart. Nice work as always
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Anne Johnston
"So soon earthly time is over,
when all your laughs and tears are done.
You will rest in peace by knowing,
that you gave all yourself and won."
What a positive way to face each day, putting our all into everything we do and enjoying life to its fullest.
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"So soon earthly time is over,
when all your laughs and tears are done.
You will rest in peace by knowing,
that you gave all yourself and won."
What a positive way to face each day, putting our all into everything we do and enjoying life to its fullest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
