Living With A Gracious Heart
A fine way of living53 total reviews
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Our graciousness is what takes us forward in our lives. It isn't how old you are, how young you are, how beautiful you are/ It is how pure you heart is. How noble your thoughts are. Your wonderful poem beautifully tells us all about it. Thanks for sharing!
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Our graciousness is what takes us forward in our lives. It isn't how old you are, how young you are, how beautiful you are/ It is how pure you heart is. How noble your thoughts are. Your wonderful poem beautifully tells us all about it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Aussie
I liked your end of days poem. My dad used to say "if you haven't hurt anyone and done your best for others, you will sleep well." Thanks for sharing. The closer we get to the light, all our troubles drift away. K xx
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I liked your end of days poem. My dad used to say "if you haven't hurt anyone and done your best for others, you will sleep well." Thanks for sharing. The closer we get to the light, all our troubles drift away. K xx
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this wonderful message about living well. And thank you for modeling how to "play with heart" by writing these poems to encourage us to stay the course. Blessings to you!
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Thank you for this wonderful message about living well. And thank you for modeling how to "play with heart" by writing these poems to encourage us to stay the course. Blessings to you!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from pharp
Jaybird,
Outstanding job, my friend, worthy of a six-star rating (sorry, I'm all out)
This is a beautifully penned poem. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow, allowing for a most enjoyable read. Thanks so much for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
Blessings...Portia
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Jaybird,
Outstanding job, my friend, worthy of a six-star rating (sorry, I'm all out)
This is a beautifully penned poem. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow, allowing for a most enjoyable read. Thanks so much for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Possummagic
This is a lovely rendition of life's journey. We face so many obstacles along the way, navigate them and move on. When we finally reach the end of our life, we face eternity on another plane. The world keeps on turning ad infinitum. Nicely written. PM
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This is a lovely rendition of life's journey. We face so many obstacles along the way, navigate them and move on. When we finally reach the end of our life, we face eternity on another plane. The world keeps on turning ad infinitum. Nicely written. PM
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Poignant musing on the approaching end of life--uplifting given the focus on reminiscing of a life well lived. Brilliant: knowing your life was played with heart!
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Poignant musing on the approaching end of life--uplifting given the focus on reminiscing of a life well lived. Brilliant: knowing your life was played with heart!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. It's all heart. Very nicely done. I enjoyed reading this. I like this living with peace and harmony is the way to sail through life's troubled waters.
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. It's all heart. Very nicely done. I enjoyed reading this. I like this living with peace and harmony is the way to sail through life's troubled waters.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Jaybird,
I believe we should always live with a gracious heart. Your poem makes is very clear to live in peace and harmony. This is such a great line, "You will rest in peace by knowing, that you gave all yourself and won. You are an beautiful writer, and it shows in your experience about life. Great poem. Well done. Great rhymes.
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Hello Jaybird,
I believe we should always live with a gracious heart. Your poem makes is very clear to live in peace and harmony. This is such a great line, "You will rest in peace by knowing, that you gave all yourself and won. You are an beautiful writer, and it shows in your experience about life. Great poem. Well done. Great rhymes.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
One thing's for certain, the tides will still run, the winds will blow, the sun will rise and set, and the world will keep (most at least, will remain shining. Beautifully written my friend, excellent, rhyming post, blessings Roy
Typo : when all laugh(t)s and tears...
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One thing's for certain, the tides will still run, the winds will blow, the sun will rise and set, and the world will keep (most at least, will remain shining. Beautifully written my friend, excellent, rhyming post, blessings Roy
Typo : when all laugh(t)s and tears...
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked that you 'gave all of yourself and won' here as it means you have lived life to the full and have no regrets, your poem champions your life, much enjoyed, good rhymes, love Dolly x
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I liked that you 'gave all of yourself and won' here as it means you have lived life to the full and have no regrets, your poem champions your life, much enjoyed, good rhymes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
