Living With A Gracious Heart
A fine way of living53 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Hi JayBird,
You have written a comforting poem about the transitioning from this Life into another more permanent Home. I love your lines:
"When the time comes to be over
and you must face eternity,
the world will remain, keep turning,
while we sail on, forever free."
Nicely done, Jay. Keep posting :-)
Senyai
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Hi JayBird,
You have written a comforting poem about the transitioning from this Life into another more permanent Home. I love your lines:
"When the time comes to be over
and you must face eternity,
the world will remain, keep turning,
while we sail on, forever free."
Nicely done, Jay. Keep posting :-)
Senyai
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I saw a bumper sticker the other day that said something like, 'If you only had the things you thanked God for, what would you be left with?' That's a scary thought, isn't it. Thank you for the beautifully written poem to help remind us.
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I saw a bumper sticker the other day that said something like, 'If you only had the things you thanked God for, what would you be left with?' That's a scary thought, isn't it. Thank you for the beautifully written poem to help remind us.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear jaybird! I love the message the poem conveys. Wow, bravo and a standing ovation!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear jaybird! I love the message the poem conveys. Wow, bravo and a standing ovation!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jay, I loved this. Yes I do hope when our time is up we can say, I would do it all over agaiy. I know for a fact that I can say that already, although I'm not that old. I have lived life to the full, and still do. I'm not religious. When it's over its over. But I've had a good run. I hope you have, as well. Ulla')))
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Hi Jay, I loved this. Yes I do hope when our time is up we can say, I would do it all over agaiy. I know for a fact that I can say that already, although I'm not that old. I have lived life to the full, and still do. I'm not religious. When it's over its over. But I've had a good run. I hope you have, as well. Ulla')))
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from estory
This is a poem of acceptance of the seasons of life, rendered in this down to Earth style. We see the world continuing on without us, the people we have left behind continuing on, and we have to accept these seasons of life as a natural progression. estory
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This is a poem of acceptance of the seasons of life, rendered in this down to Earth style. We see the world continuing on without us, the people we have left behind continuing on, and we have to accept these seasons of life as a natural progression. estory
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Sally Law
I'm glad you have this hope in God and trust in Him for eternal life. I have this too. I actually look forward to heaven and being with the Lord always. Sending you my best today as always, dear Jay. Sally :))
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I'm glad you have this hope in God and trust in Him for eternal life. I have this too. I actually look forward to heaven and being with the Lord always. Sending you my best today as always, dear Jay. Sally :))
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
You certainly do write about a fine way of living Jay and living with peace and harmony is definitely the right way to live.
I enjoyed your well penned poem.
Blessings
Janet
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You certainly do write about a fine way of living Jay and living with peace and harmony is definitely the right way to live.
I enjoyed your well penned poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from June Sargent
We can avoid shipwreck only by focusing on the positive. Like an anchor for the soul - faith, hope and love can keep us from being dashed to bits by life's storms. A gracious and grateful heart will not only keep us afloat, but it will also bring peace and harmony to those around us. Wonderful sentiments in this piece.
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We can avoid shipwreck only by focusing on the positive. Like an anchor for the soul - faith, hope and love can keep us from being dashed to bits by life's storms. A gracious and grateful heart will not only keep us afloat, but it will also bring peace and harmony to those around us. Wonderful sentiments in this piece.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Your note and poem
are appreciated, jaybird.
-A well written poem with
effective images that
center around the theme
of a voyage.
-I like the line about
"knowing your life was
played with heart."
-A very good concluding verse, too.
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-Your note and poem
are appreciated, jaybird.
-A well written poem with
effective images that
center around the theme
of a voyage.
-I like the line about
"knowing your life was
played with heart."
-A very good concluding verse, too.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
I love your writing! So simple yet so deep. You delivered a great message! We must sail through life graciously and keep our heart pure as melody. The poem flows very smoothly and is penned beautifully. Thanks for sharing!
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I love your writing! So simple yet so deep. You delivered a great message! We must sail through life graciously and keep our heart pure as melody. The poem flows very smoothly and is penned beautifully. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
