Dawn
I love the tender dawn reminds of a barefoot girl.3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
This is very well written! I could feel the dawn creeping in the window. Stirring emotion in the reader is what we do as writers!! You stayed within the syllable guidelines, and your graphic fits the story perfectly. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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This is very well written! I could feel the dawn creeping in the window. Stirring emotion in the reader is what we do as writers!! You stayed within the syllable guidelines, and your graphic fits the story perfectly. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for the read and encouraging comments.
Comment from Ricky1024
This contest entry was well written and it was also rich in theme as well as imagery.
It flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with your poem.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This contest entry was well written and it was also rich in theme as well as imagery.
It flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with your poem.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your read and encouraging review.
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is a lovely poem you have written here with a beautiful image you have chosento match it. Ithe poem it seems to float via the.word choices and the uplifting theme
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is a lovely poem you have written here with a beautiful image you have chosento match it. Ithe poem it seems to float via the.word choices and the uplifting theme
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your read and encouraging review.
