Restful Repose
Quiet Intimacy20 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem sends a sweet and powerful message about the mindset that a person is so fortunate to have--that true love is better than material things.
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Your ultra-concise poem sends a sweet and powerful message about the mindset that a person is so fortunate to have--that true love is better than material things.
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Comment from Janet Foor
Restful repose causes one to think of quiet intimacy which in this chaotic world is a beautiful thought.
So often people think riches and worldly things will make them happy but your poem clearly identifies in a beautiful way what truly makes one happy.
Well done.
Blessings.
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Restful repose causes one to think of quiet intimacy which in this chaotic world is a beautiful thought.
So often people think riches and worldly things will make them happy but your poem clearly identifies in a beautiful way what truly makes one happy.
Well done.
Blessings.
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Comment from Sharon Davis
A clearly stated perspective highlighting the idea that big and grand gestures are not required to create a sense of intimacy.
Well presented.
Good job.
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A clearly stated perspective highlighting the idea that big and grand gestures are not required to create a sense of intimacy.
Well presented.
Good job.
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The simple need trumps all. There is nothing more enjoyable than being with someone you love in a serene atmosphere where not a word needs to be spoken. You have it right.
Ralf
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The simple need trumps all. There is nothing more enjoyable than being with someone you love in a serene atmosphere where not a word needs to be spoken. You have it right.
Ralf
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Comment from wilbs
You know what came to mind, as I was reading what you wrote, I thought about many things, like how faith works, and what love is, and to even deeper things like who God is, as in the best, and greatest things about life is when we uncover the things we could not see with our eyes, but are sown and born from the heart...
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You know what came to mind, as I was reading what you wrote, I thought about many things, like how faith works, and what love is, and to even deeper things like who God is, as in the best, and greatest things about life is when we uncover the things we could not see with our eyes, but are sown and born from the heart...
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Comment from Senyai
Hi Brenda,
This is a lovely poem that says so much in it's four lines. Elegant illustration to accompany your work as well.
The restful nature of your poem with its carefully chosen words makes it enviable to have a relationship you describe. Well done!
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Brenda,
This is a lovely poem that says so much in it's four lines. Elegant illustration to accompany your work as well.
The restful nature of your poem with its carefully chosen words makes it enviable to have a relationship you describe. Well done!
All the best,
Senyai
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Comment from lancellot
This is short, sweet and written with undeniable truth. Four lines, two rhymes schemes and a message that anyone who has know love and wishes for it in its purest form would treasure.
Well done.
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This is short, sweet and written with undeniable truth. Four lines, two rhymes schemes and a message that anyone who has know love and wishes for it in its purest form would treasure.
Well done.
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Comment from royowen
Yes indeed. There's nothing like being at home in familiar surrounds of home, always comfortable in the arms of a loved one, not always practical, but at least one's mind can drift to that comfort. A beautifully written poem, well done, good writing, blessings Roy
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Yes indeed. There's nothing like being at home in familiar surrounds of home, always comfortable in the arms of a loved one, not always practical, but at least one's mind can drift to that comfort. A beautifully written poem, well done, good writing, blessings Roy
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Comment from RodG
I commend the Speakerin this poem who does not seek riches or great adventures, but can truly appreciate being in her lover's arms. I like your phrasing "restful repose." Rod
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I commend the Speakerin this poem who does not seek riches or great adventures, but can truly appreciate being in her lover's arms. I like your phrasing "restful repose." Rod
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, there is nothing like relaxing in the arms of the one you love. I like the phrase restful repose. It says it so well. I like the artwork of the couple holding each other close. In fact, I like the whole presentation and would give you a sixth star if I had one to give. This is a lovely sentiment without being overly sentimental. Thank you for sharing this excellent piece.
Have a pleasant day,
Jesse
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Yes, there is nothing like relaxing in the arms of the one you love. I like the phrase restful repose. It says it so well. I like the artwork of the couple holding each other close. In fact, I like the whole presentation and would give you a sixth star if I had one to give. This is a lovely sentiment without being overly sentimental. Thank you for sharing this excellent piece.
Have a pleasant day,
Jesse
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
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