Those Tender Years
Double Refrain Kyrielle24 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your Double Refrain Kyrielle! In a mother's heart, we treasure all those early days of our kids, the cute and goofy ways of childhood. And your modification at the end is perfect. Because they will always be your kids!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Loved your Double Refrain Kyrielle! In a mother's heart, we treasure all those early days of our kids, the cute and goofy ways of childhood. And your modification at the end is perfect. Because they will always be your kids!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you, thank you, thank you for this wonderful review and stars.
It's raining here and is supposed to for the next few days. Yayyyy.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
I'm not familiar with the style of the kyrielle poem but in this case I was taken with the story and the sentiment in the poem. It's written with excellent rhyme and meter.
You captured the emotions of how parents feel about their children no matter how old they all are.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Hello Yvonne.
I'm not familiar with the style of the kyrielle poem but in this case I was taken with the story and the sentiment in the poem. It's written with excellent rhyme and meter.
You captured the emotions of how parents feel about their children no matter how old they all are.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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It never changes. Thank you for this most wonderful review!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvonne,
I think all mothers with their kids were little again or maybe that they were young again. I wonder if we would make the same mistakes.
This is a well done entry to for the double refrain kyrielle.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Yvonne,
I think all mothers with their kids were little again or maybe that they were young again. I wonder if we would make the same mistakes.
This is a well done entry to for the double refrain kyrielle.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Joan
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Even with the same mistakes, I'd do it all over again. Thanks, Joan.
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So would I. You're welcome.
Joan
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So would I. You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a delightful poem of reminisces written in a difficult form which you mastered beautifully.
I fondly think of those times when "they were mine" and I was so very important to them.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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This is a delightful poem of reminisces written in a difficult form which you mastered beautifully.
I fondly think of those times when "they were mine" and I was so very important to them.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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It changes somewhat but never completely. Thanks, Janet.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done on this difficult poem. I like the message you have portrayed that our children are always ours, from the time they were born until they die. I cherish the relationship I have with my adult children.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Very well done on this difficult poem. I like the message you have portrayed that our children are always ours, from the time they were born until they die. I cherish the relationship I have with my adult children.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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I do, too. Even though I lost a son in September, I still rejoice in the years I had with him. My youngest son and I often talk over old times. Thank you, Anne.
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You are welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The double refrain kyrielle is very appealing to me. You have used the style to express the love of mother and sons that thrives through time's natural changes. Exceptional piece
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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The double refrain kyrielle is very appealing to me. You have used the style to express the love of mother and sons that thrives through time's natural changes. Exceptional piece
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you. What a great review.
Comment from aryr
I really loved this Double Refrain Kyrielle. The picture you used was so cute. I totally loved your words, which was of very fond memories as your sons grew. You took them through the steps of their lives. Well done, great job.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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I really loved this Double Refrain Kyrielle. The picture you used was so cute. I totally loved your words, which was of very fond memories as your sons grew. You took them through the steps of their lives. Well done, great job.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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I wish I could do it all over again. It was such fun. Thank you.
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You are so welcome, it was great.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A charming form but it seems so complex. i enjoyed reading your poem and reflecting as I did, on my own boys as they were young and all mine.
I know the feeling, Yvonne.
Ralf
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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A charming form but it seems so complex. i enjoyed reading your poem and reflecting as I did, on my own boys as they were young and all mine.
I know the feeling, Yvonne.
Ralf
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Don't you wish you could do it again? It was such fun. Thank you.
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Yes! We learned so much from those little guys.
Ralf
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I do that as well, Yvonne. How I loved having babies and being a mother/housewife. Nice poem, great memories for both of us. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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I do that as well, Yvonne. How I loved having babies and being a mother/housewife. Nice poem, great memories for both of us. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad. They were such fun.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, it's a wonderful poem where you look back at the years when you're boys were young an all yours. Then they grew up and you realised that they were still all yours. That's exactly it. They will always be your boys. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Hi Yvonne, it's a wonderful poem where you look back at the years when you're boys were young an all yours. Then they grew up and you realised that they were still all yours. That's exactly it. They will always be your boys. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Exactly. God gave me good material. 8-)
