Whirlpool or Maytag
Looking for love in the laundromat19 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, I've heard/read it all now. You are advertising for a maid, perhaps, or a mate who will become a maid. This is hilarious, but still has some good points in what you are looking for. You did a good job. Mystery Author. I know this is fiction, but it was fun to read. The picture is great. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Haha, I've heard/read it all now. You are advertising for a maid, perhaps, or a mate who will become a maid. This is hilarious, but still has some good points in what you are looking for. You did a good job. Mystery Author. I know this is fiction, but it was fun to read. The picture is great. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from royowen
This certainly sounds like a guy who is advertising for the "perfect" girlfriend. He is the rough, huntin', shootin', fishin' guy with a a very strong, optimistic nature. Good luck with that one. Excellent job. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This certainly sounds like a guy who is advertising for the "perfect" girlfriend. He is the rough, huntin', shootin', fishin' guy with a a very strong, optimistic nature. Good luck with that one. Excellent job. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Most welcome
Comment from L. Kalere
This is just hilarious and painfully honest ... not at all like the phony ones (I like long walks on the beach...as if). The kicker is asking for photos of the boat and washing machine. Great Entry!
Linda
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is just hilarious and painfully honest ... not at all like the phony ones (I like long walks on the beach...as if). The kicker is asking for photos of the boat and washing machine. Great Entry!
Linda
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much Linda. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Very funny and amusing ad. An original take on the contest. Good visuals and creative imagery and outstanding artwork.
You didnt put a word count. 100 words maximum. It was a requirement. I even created a separate thread about. I don't know how many words you have. You can put it in the author notes or in the description.
This needs to be done now. The booths open tomorrow. I will be glad to re-rate once this is done.
Thank you for joining and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Very funny and amusing ad. An original take on the contest. Good visuals and creative imagery and outstanding artwork.
You didnt put a word count. 100 words maximum. It was a requirement. I even created a separate thread about. I don't know how many words you have. You can put it in the author notes or in the description.
This needs to be done now. The booths open tomorrow. I will be glad to re-rate once this is done.
Thank you for joining and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Input the word count in.
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I saw you added the count and raised the rating. Good luck in the contest.
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I saw you added the word count, and upgraded my rating. Good luck.
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I upgraded the rating. I saw that you added the word count. Good luck in the contest.
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sorry this came out 3 times. When I looked at first, reply didn't come out, so I did it again twice (lol)
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is a great ad with a lot of information about you, your wants and needs, and the ideal woman you are seeking. "Looks are unimportant, but preference will be given to a woman with her own bass boat, hunting cabin, dishwasher and washer and dryer."
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is a great ad with a lot of information about you, your wants and needs, and the ideal woman you are seeking. "Looks are unimportant, but preference will be given to a woman with her own bass boat, hunting cabin, dishwasher and washer and dryer."
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from blondie560
Very humorous! Probably very true too! I do draw the line at the toilet seat though, that's just common courtesy. Now if you wanted to attract more women you should offer to buy them a washing machine of their choice!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Very humorous! Probably very true too! I do draw the line at the toilet seat though, that's just common courtesy. Now if you wanted to attract more women you should offer to buy them a washing machine of their choice!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Toilet seat is negotiable. Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from RodG
I wonder if this gent will get any positive feedback. I am sure there are single women out there who own washing machines and dryers--but a bass boat, too? A fun read. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I wonder if this gent will get any positive feedback. I am sure there are single women out there who own washing machines and dryers--but a bass boat, too? A fun read. Rod
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much Rod. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Hilarious! The ad is amusing in itself, the wrap-up is spot-on. Priceless punchline. I've seen several entries for this contest--this is right up there--hoe to see you in the winners' circle!
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Hilarious! The ad is amusing in itself, the wrap-up is spot-on. Priceless punchline. I've seen several entries for this contest--this is right up there--hoe to see you in the winners' circle!
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sharon Davis
This is a creative response to the Online personal ad writing prompt.
The piece is well composed, and well presented.
Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is a creative response to the Online personal ad writing prompt.
The piece is well composed, and well presented.
Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
