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Looking for love in the laundromat

19 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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That's hilarious, Earl! I guess I missed this because it was in a contest! Through the ad we get a clear picture of the ad writer! A well deserved win. Congratulations!!

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
    Sorry it's taken me so long to reply. Thank you for reading and reviewing my work. I think things are slowing down enough I'll be able to get on Fanstory more frequently.
reply by lyenochka on 10-Nov-2021
    Glad to see you back, Earl! Hope all is well with you and yours!
Comment from tfawcus
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You have described the perfect woman here! I feel sure she must exist somewhere apart from in your imagination. I just hope she reads and responds to your ad.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from equestrik
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Sounds like quite a specifically state ad. That will be quite a woman who fulfills those wants. This is a good presentation for the on-line personal ad contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is a clever ad. I like his priorities not a picture of her but a washing machine and boat better yet a cabin and a dryer.
Very funny.
Good luck with the contest.
Regards
Mary

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much Mary. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Wendy G
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I enjoyed this one and its fun list of criteria. I wonder how many applicants you would have! lol. Nicely written, with wit and good humour. Good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Patty Palmer
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This entry is pretty funny. I really like the part when asking the interested party to send a picture of the boat and the washing machine. Your ad made me laugh the most. You've got my vote! Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much Patty. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from karenina
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This is too funny! I think k you've channelled the real priorities of a whole lot of men...and
It was refreshing to see such h a and of, no frills, "This is what I want." Personal Ad contest entry!

Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much Karenina. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by karenina on 07-Jun-2021
    If I were a handicapper, I'd bet you'll win this thing! Great humor!---Karenina
Comment from MissMerri
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This is the best ad so far. Where do I apply? You have done an excellent job of describing in an amusing way a man who is seeking a maid/companion/roommate. Good luck in this contest. You are pretty funny.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from amahra
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Hahaha Boy did I need this after all of the drama I'm reading and writing. I really needed to laugh and you provided that with this well-written piece here. Thank you for posting and hope your guy finds his girl whoever the poor thing may be.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
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Hi mystery writer

Well, if I was an old fashioned gal with my own, bass boat, hunting cabin, dishwasher and washer and dryer I'd apply immediately for sure :). So cheeky of you to ask for a picture of said items. I'm sure if I applied you be so taken with me you'd forget about photos darling. You'd have other things on your mind for sure, LOL
Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Thank you very much Pete. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.