Safe arrival
The best moment in life15 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
So true! Greetings--I'm out trolling to top off two-penny pieces that got stuck at 14 reviews. I'm magic #15--your recognition ribbon is on the way. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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So true! Greetings--I'm out trolling to top off two-penny pieces that got stuck at 14 reviews. I'm magic #15--your recognition ribbon is on the way. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much Liz. Much appreciated. Jen. X
Comment from Janet Foor
The arrival of a child is truly an emotional experience and the safe arrival of that child is a blessing for the best moments.
Congratulations.
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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The arrival of a child is truly an emotional experience and the safe arrival of that child is a blessing for the best moments.
Congratulations.
Janet
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Many thanks Janet
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A fine short poem. In few words, you have expressed the joy of holding the baby in your arms and the picture says all about the joy of parenthood. Well done! Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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A fine short poem. In few words, you have expressed the joy of holding the baby in your arms and the picture says all about the joy of parenthood. Well done! Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Senyai
Hi Jenintorre,
This is a warm and cuddly 5-7-5 poem that brings back the memories of early motherhood and again with the birth of grandchildren. Very sweet and perfect for the contest.
Finely crafted with treasured sentiment.
Have a great weekend,
Senyai
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Hi Jenintorre,
This is a warm and cuddly 5-7-5 poem that brings back the memories of early motherhood and again with the birth of grandchildren. Very sweet and perfect for the contest.
Finely crafted with treasured sentiment.
Have a great weekend,
Senyai
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Wendy G
You are right - this is an extremely emotional climactic moment, which is almost indescribable. You have manged to convey that feeling very well, in few words. Your picture is just right to support your poem too. Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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You are right - this is an extremely emotional climactic moment, which is almost indescribable. You have manged to convey that feeling very well, in few words. Your picture is just right to support your poem too. Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Thanks Wenfy. So glad you like it. Take care. Jen
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, you have described the feelings and emotions of giving life so very well in so few words, gorgeous photo, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Excellent, you have described the feelings and emotions of giving life so very well in so few words, gorgeous photo, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much Kahpot for your continued support. Much appreciated. Jen
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Jen.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You get to the heart of
having a child very well.
-It is an experience that
goes beyond words because
it is so emotional.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Jen.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You get to the heart of
having a child very well.
-It is an experience that
goes beyond words because
it is so emotional.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Tha m you so nuch for your review. Much apprecizted. Jen
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You are quite welcome, Jen.
Comment from Susan Larson
Having experienced it three times, I must agree. Seeing and holding this human being that was created within you by divine design is a most awesome experience.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Having experienced it three times, I must agree. Seeing and holding this human being that was created within you by divine design is a most awesome experience.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Thank you Susan. Take care. Jen
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Very beautiful photo selection to compliment your words as well. Very Well done. Congrats to Mom and dad . Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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This is a nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Very beautiful photo selection to compliment your words as well. Very Well done. Congrats to Mom and dad . Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021
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Thanks Joann take care. Jen.
Comment from lyenochka
I agree that whole ordeal of anticipation, anxiety, and the whole birthing process that pregnancy brings, followed by the amazing sense of joy and awe at the miracle of new life all make for an emotional experience!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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I agree that whole ordeal of anticipation, anxiety, and the whole birthing process that pregnancy brings, followed by the amazing sense of joy and awe at the miracle of new life all make for an emotional experience!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Thanks Helen
