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Creation

God spoke and it was so...

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Comment from amahra
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You created a fantastic writing of Good and evil.

Lucifer, the angel, fought against God -

He is now a deceiver, thief, and fraud.

Then wickedness developed in man's heart-

God confirmed a plan from the very start. [this stanza is the favorite, though I loved them all.]

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Amahra,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from harmony13
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A lovely poem! The author's words are descriptive, clear, informative
and creative. I pondered on praising God for all he has done. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these
words. Hope you are doing well.......Maria

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Maria,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Creation, presented in four AABB quatrains, reminds the readers of God's work with us, the presence of Satan, and the need for Grace tocomplete thecycle of our souls.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Bill,

    Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Amen! The true story of salvation. Man cannot save himself, though he tries, the government won't save you, nor lots of many. Only Jesus. I'm so grateful He chose to save me. Well done!!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Roxanna,

    Thanks so much for an outstanding review, very kind comments, and six-star rating; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Honey, you have honored God and presented Him wonderfully. I wish every atheist could read this and they might go away a believer. Not all of us who believe are perfect, but we worship a perfect God.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Sherry,

    Your words are true, my friend; we worship a perfect God who loves us all.

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from Ben Colder
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Good post. You summed it up very well. He proved to all that Love covers a multitude of mistakes, and through the blood of Christ, we are clean and free from those mistakes. My blessings to you.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Ben,

    Thanks so much for your review and very review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful day,

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Portia.
-A well written poem
with good meter, and
effective imagery and rhyme.
-It flows very well, too, as
you tell this story.
-You did a really good
job with the verse about Lucifer,
and have a very good closing verse.
-Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Pam,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Jul-2021
    You are very welcome, Portia.
Comment from Teri7
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Portia, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about creation and our loving God who created all things. You used very good descriptive words and very nice picture that went well with your words. I enjoyed reading this. I hope you are doing good. Been praying for you all. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Teri,

    Thanks so much, my sister, for this outstanding review, very kind comments, and six-star rating; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from l.raven
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HI Portia, God knew what His plan was for
all creatures...and humans from the beginning...
right down to satan...

I love your story told my sweet friend...as it was in the beginning...
and I love your poem...so very well worded...and very well written...and I love your picture...love you...Linda xxoo



 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Linga,

    Your reviews are always a blessing; thanks so much for your support and very kind comments.

    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by l.raven on 22-Jul-2021
    Hi Portia, Thank You so very much sweet girl...and you are always so welcome....

    you have a wonderful evening...God Bless...love xxoo
Comment from tfawcus
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You have woven biblical content into this poem of yours to illustrate the positive message of hope and the value of faith. Despite the efforts of the fallen angel, the power of the Lord is invincible.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thanks so much for your review, rating, and comments; they are appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia