The Owl and Me
A First and Last poem24 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written first and last poem you have penned about you and the owl. You used very cute and interesting words and adorable art work. I used to collect owls when I was younger. They were very interesting and neat to me. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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This is a very cute and well written first and last poem you have penned about you and the owl. You used very cute and interesting words and adorable art work. I used to collect owls when I was younger. They were very interesting and neat to me. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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I love owls, too, and have collected a few. Thanks for a delightful review. Love you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A First and Last poem
The Owl and Me
by damommy
Towels are creepy when they stare with blank eyes..like they are checking you out. They seem intelligent. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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A First and Last poem
The Owl and Me
by damommy
Towels are creepy when they stare with blank eyes..like they are checking you out. They seem intelligent. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you. They do have a start, don't they? lol
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your poem! I imagined a child in the tree communing with the mysterious owl and sharing time together and somehow understanding each other. Great job with the first and last poem!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Loved your poem! I imagined a child in the tree communing with the mysterious owl and sharing time together and somehow understanding each other. Great job with the first and last poem!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you formed a picture of it in your imagination.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written 15 line poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation as well. Great photo to compliment your words. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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This is a nicely written 15 line poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation as well. Great photo to compliment your words. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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Your welcome
Comment from Nottoway
I found myself looking at the owl as I took a seat and wondered what wise wisdom he would impart.
And, we could not communicate because of the different tongues we speak. I guess I waited for him to give a "hoot" but he just watched!
Like I have said before, your bring the reader along on your magical journey of imagination and thoughtfulness.
Flawless!
I need a basketful of stars just for you.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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I found myself looking at the owl as I took a seat and wondered what wise wisdom he would impart.
And, we could not communicate because of the different tongues we speak. I guess I waited for him to give a "hoot" but he just watched!
Like I have said before, your bring the reader along on your magical journey of imagination and thoughtfulness.
Flawless!
I need a basketful of stars just for you.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Awww, you're too kind. Thank you for a lovely review and comments.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
For some reason, this poem brought me tears...something endearing in it - or a memory... The rhyme is exquisite and it sings to the reader's heart.
How I love your poetry, dear lady -- and this one is special!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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For some reason, this poem brought me tears...something endearing in it - or a memory... The rhyme is exquisite and it sings to the reader's heart.
How I love your poetry, dear lady -- and this one is special!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for saying that. It means a lot to me.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your club challenge poem, Yvonne. Your picture is perfect for your well thought out words. Great job with the complex style. I like the progression of time that is evident in your poem. I can tell you (the one is this poem) enjoyed observing the owl. You are a natural when it comes to writing about nature, Yvonne.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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You did a great job with your club challenge poem, Yvonne. Your picture is perfect for your well thought out words. Great job with the complex style. I like the progression of time that is evident in your poem. I can tell you (the one is this poem) enjoyed observing the owl. You are a natural when it comes to writing about nature, Yvonne.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you for a wonderful review and stars!
Comment from Sally Law
A beautifully written and illustrated poem of your owl relation. I love the owls. Their heads can turn around almost 180 degrees. The one on our property is a night owl, but we sight him occasionally. He likes to stay up late. I enjoyed this new form and the rhyming pattern.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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A beautifully written and illustrated poem of your owl relation. I love the owls. Their heads can turn around almost 180 degrees. The one on our property is a night owl, but we sight him occasionally. He likes to stay up late. I enjoyed this new form and the rhyming pattern.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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We used to have one when we lived in the woods that terrified our Great Dane. lol. Thanks for a lovely review.
Comment from aryr
What a very creative first and last poem, DAMOMMY. I loved the concept of the owl staring at you and you staring at the owl. Definitely a beautiful picture. I enjoyed the idea of you both watching each other, very well done and very much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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What a very creative first and last poem, DAMOMMY. I loved the concept of the owl staring at you and you staring at the owl. Definitely a beautiful picture. I enjoyed the idea of you both watching each other, very well done and very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
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You are so welcome, damommy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet and endearing write and you made me smile when you said you speak with different tongues! A skilfully written poem, well metered and rhymed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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This is a sweet and endearing write and you made me smile when you said you speak with different tongues! A skilfully written poem, well metered and rhymed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much!
