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Heaven's Bliss

Two love birds in love.

2 total reviews 
Comment from lancellot
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This is very cute and you did a good job making the presentation add to the poem's theme. I would look at the second line again. It feels just a bit off for some reason.

I wish you luck in the contest

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

reply by the author on 29-May-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I recently saw two pigeons engaging with each other on the fence and I videoed it for my daughters, they were playful and kissing each other, it was wonderful, your poem reminded me of it, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

reply by the author on 29-May-2021
    Thank you!