Comment from Dilettante junior

Excellent

Dear Patty,

Been away, missed a few.
You made great use of your 20 syllables. I found positivity, truth, light, rhymes and sheer wisdom in your precious words. This could well be used as an inspiration on greeting cards, on billboards, bookmarks, bumper stickers :)

Well done,
Cheers,
DJ

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021

Thank you for your nice review.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Patricia,
This flowing rhyming couplet give advice that everyone should follow. It seems some don't follow it though. I like the artwork. It seems to be a flowe with a strong backbone to fight against bad times.
Keep writnig and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 31-May-2021

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reply by the author on 31-May-2021

Thank you for your review.

reply by dragonpoet on 31-May-2021

You're welcome, Patricia.
Joan

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a lovely 20 syllable poem and a good life message It is when you are down it is sometimes difficult to stay on the positive path. This is a lovely bright presentation to read early Friday morning. Cheers valda

 Comment Written 27-May-2021

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reply by the author on 27-May-2021

Thanks for your lovely review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Those are wise words, Patricia! You met the syllable count perfectly while giving sound advice!
And I just bought your book via Kindle. So congratulations again on this accomplishment!!

 Comment Written 26-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your kind review. Thanks to for buying my book.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Words to live by, sometimes we over think things, and still make wrong decisions. If we think about the right thing to do, over the selfish thing to do, we should not have regrets. If our conscience is clear. God will smile.

 Comment Written 26-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from justafan

Excellent

Hello there! I really like this! You put plenty of punch in 20 syllables. Well done my friend.
Thanks for sharing

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 26-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

This 20 syllable commentary sends a clear directive, with some good advice.

Effective and efficient. Well composed and presented.

Nice job.

Thanks for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your 20 syllables make an awesome, and true, statement, Patricia. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I like the end rhymes, the beautiful image, and your clear message.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Wise words, Patricia. I enjoyed reading your philosophical verse that is accompanied by your own stunning artwork. The entire presentation is delightful. I wish you luck in the contest.

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Great 20 syllable advice here. It meets all of the requirements and is brightly formatted. Life can send us bumps in the road so in a panick, do not make unwise decisions that you will regret especially lifelong decisions that you will live with the rest of your life!

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your kind review.