Wishful Thinking
A lune for the contest16 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes this is good advice June, and beautifully presented. If you spend your days wishing for what others have you don't get to enjoy what you have. I've always thought it a waste of time envying others. Nicely done with your Lune poem, cheers valda
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Yes this is good advice June, and beautifully presented. If you spend your days wishing for what others have you don't get to enjoy what you have. I've always thought it a waste of time envying others. Nicely done with your Lune poem, cheers valda
Comment Written 27-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Comment from patcelaw
One of the worse things we can do to ourselves as writers , is to compare ourselves with others. If we do we soon find we lose out own talents.
Patricia
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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One of the worse things we can do to ourselves as writers , is to compare ourselves with others. If we do we soon find we lose out own talents.
Patricia
Comment Written 27-May-2021
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written lune poem. It has a beautiful presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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This is a nicely written lune poem. It has a beautiful presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Your welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune poem, Wishful Thinking, has the right set up and reminds the readers that we all are stars who can be brilliant.
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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This lune poem, Wishful Thinking, has the right set up and reminds the readers that we all are stars who can be brilliant.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
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Comment from Sharon Davis
This line poem offers some sage advice- see your own beauty.
The piece says much in its very few words.
The artwork accompanying the piece and its title create a complete package. Nice work.
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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This line poem offers some sage advice- see your own beauty.
The piece says much in its very few words.
The artwork accompanying the piece and its title create a complete package. Nice work.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
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Comment from Aiste Radvilaviciute
True. Because if you finally get what others have but it's not your own dream, you will feel empty. Because in the end, it's still someone else's dream.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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True. Because if you finally get what others have but it's not your own dream, you will feel empty. Because in the end, it's still someone else's dream.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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So glad you understood the sentiments of this lune. Everyone has their own unique beauty. Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and
nice presentation, June.
-A well written lune with
good syllable count and topic.
-A very good message about
appreciating what you have.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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-Lovely image and
nice presentation, June.
-A well written lune with
good syllable count and topic.
-A very good message about
appreciating what you have.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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So glad you understood the sentiments of this lune. Everyone has their own unique beauty. Thank you for sharing your insights.
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You are very welcome, June, and I appreciate your reply, and agree about unique beauty.
Comment from Aussie
I think the swan got his wish, feathers of peacock? Liked the message in your contest entry. We should never covet our neighbors goods. Be at ease with what we have and realise it's not what we want, it's what we need. Good luck June. K XX
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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I think the swan got his wish, feathers of peacock? Liked the message in your contest entry. We should never covet our neighbors goods. Be at ease with what we have and realise it's not what we want, it's what we need. Good luck June. K XX
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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So glad you understood the sentiments of this lune. Everyone has their own unique beauty. Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your words here, often others may have more possessions but they are not necessarily happier, happiness is something we hold in our hearts, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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I so agree with your words here, often others may have more possessions but they are not necessarily happier, happiness is something we hold in our hearts, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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So glad you understood the sentiments of this lune. Everyone has their own unique beauty. Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, I wish I had a six left for this beauty! Alas, my larder of sixes if empty.
This was gorgeous, from your stunning picture to the equally stunning words. I never tried a Lune poem, but you inspired me.
Amazing visuals and imagery. I wish you luck in the contest, this may be a winner.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Oh, I wish I had a six left for this beauty! Alas, my larder of sixes if empty.
This was gorgeous, from your stunning picture to the equally stunning words. I never tried a Lune poem, but you inspired me.
Amazing visuals and imagery. I wish you luck in the contest, this may be a winner.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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So glad you understood the sentiments of this lune. Everyone has their own unique beauty. Thank you for sharing your insights.
