The Perfect Date
A Romantic Interlude34 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You created the perfect scene for a romantic date by the water. I like your use of "tea" as and adjective for "sandwiches" and the "water" became the ocean. Great entry for the "Use These Words" challenge!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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You created the perfect scene for a romantic date by the water. I like your use of "tea" as and adjective for "sandwiches" and the "water" became the ocean. Great entry for the "Use These Words" challenge!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank You!
Comment from Ric Myworld
You sure put me in the mood to gaze out over the water with beverage in hand. And of course, and sandwich and good company always makes everything better. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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You sure put me in the mood to gaze out over the water with beverage in hand. And of course, and sandwich and good company always makes everything better. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Comment from Patty Palmer
Your words describe a truly perfect date. the sound of the waves rolling up to the shore. The warm breeze flowing through your hair. A beautiful sunset to watch as the sky turns orange and fades into night. Nice job!
Patty
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Your words describe a truly perfect date. the sound of the waves rolling up to the shore. The warm breeze flowing through your hair. A beautiful sunset to watch as the sky turns orange and fades into night. Nice job!
Patty
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Thanks Patty!
Comment from jenintorre
This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it and imagining that I was there. You used the words so well especially southern comfort. Loved it. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it and imagining that I was there. You used the words so well especially southern comfort. Loved it. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Thank You Jen!
Comment from ruzu27
You have penned a very nice poem using
the required words. Also the picture of
art which you use for your writing
prompt entry is very nice.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes
for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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You have penned a very nice poem using
the required words. Also the picture of
art which you use for your writing
prompt entry is very nice.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes
for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Thank You!
Comment from wilbs
Tea (Check) sandwiches and Southern Comfort (check) by the Water (check) while watching the Waves (check) crash to the shore as the Sun (check) sets and a gentle Breeze (check) blows; everything checked out perfectly, and that is all you need to have a perfect date, I give that a double check mark, (check, check)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Tea (Check) sandwiches and Southern Comfort (check) by the Water (check) while watching the Waves (check) crash to the shore as the Sun (check) sets and a gentle Breeze (check) blows; everything checked out perfectly, and that is all you need to have a perfect date, I give that a double check mark, (check, check)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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LOL Thank You!
Comment from Eternal Muse
You made excellent use of the required words creating the perfect date in your poem. Excellent imagery and visuals, and I like your creativity.
A remarkable choice of an artwork. Good luck in the contest, this should do very well.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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You made excellent use of the required words creating the perfect date in your poem. Excellent imagery and visuals, and I like your creativity.
A remarkable choice of an artwork. Good luck in the contest, this should do very well.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written poem you have penned using the required words with very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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This is a very nice and well written poem you have penned using the required words with very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
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Comment from royowen
A short but nicely written response to the contest's requirements. The words set in place have been very well negotiated by you, weaving in a great work, and worthy entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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A short but nicely written response to the contest's requirements. The words set in place have been very well negotiated by you, weaving in a great work, and worthy entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Well done
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Thank You!
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A pleasure
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Perfect Date
by Brenda Henderson
Hello, Brenda,
Beautiful short poem with wonderful imagery...it has the qualities of haiku although it uses more syllables than 17. Excellent entry for the Use These Words writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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The Perfect Date
by Brenda Henderson
Hello, Brenda,
Beautiful short poem with wonderful imagery...it has the qualities of haiku although it uses more syllables than 17. Excellent entry for the Use These Words writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank You!
