Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is a clever and humorous entry, with the added bonus of being acrostic. Your image is well chosen too. You've met the brief, given us rhyme as well. Good wishes for your entry.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Jill McCauslin

Excellent

This is good. I always like poems that are about the contest. They make me laugh. It's hard to say much in 25 words, isn't it? Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your review. You're right, 25 words is not easy.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I really like this one... it is so difficult to accomplish. I tried my hand at it, but could not come up with a acceptable verse. I applaud your creativity and talent!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

Wow, I love your offering for the contest, beautiful rhyme and concept - For Fanstory, a fiver bunch
I pondered over it at lunch
Very hard this twenty-five
Ecstatic now it's come alive
Stored in my poem archive- Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your review and for the six stars.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Great job on this 25 word contest, making it into an acrostic. Great rhyming. I am sure it took a lot of pondering, and juggling words, but you came up with a cute poem.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by Anne Johnston on 26-May-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You put your 25 words to good use here with an acrostic poem. This is well thought out and clever and could win the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Very cute and light. A fun piece for the reader as it tickles the tongue as it is read out loud. I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very clever indeed, author. And of course a hyphenated word, counts as one word, so you have managed to with a great deal of thought create a cube of fives, and also a most cool endorsement of FanStory.

Wishing you great luck with the voters. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-May-2021

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reply by the author on 26-May-2021

Thanks for your review. I actually wasn't sure about the hyphenated word.