Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This entire verse from meaning to art is so exquisite and really touches the reader. It is an great entry for the Renga book and will shine in the chapters there. Wonderful write, June11

Melissa

 Comment Written 24-May-2021

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reply by the author on 24-May-2021

Thanks, Melissa. I'll let you know if and when I get a camellia - one of my mom's favorites. Glad you enjoyed this addition to the book of Renga.

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

June, this is a very nice 5-7-5 poem. I, too, believe love never dies. It's what makes us spiritual beings.
Beautiful photo.
Good luck in the photo.
Stay well.
Cindy

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 Comment Written 24-May-2021

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reply by the author on 24-May-2021

Glad you enjoyed this piece. Love does transcend all things - memories keep us going. Thanks for dropping by today. Always nice to hear from you.

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 24-May-2021

You?re welcome, June. Have a wonderful week. : )

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

June,
Yes, death does lose when you have touched others during life. That is a second kind or eternal life. Pretty picture used for illustration.
Joan

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 Comment Written 24-May-2021

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reply by the author on 24-May-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. Feedback is always appreciated!

reply by dragonpoet on 24-May-2021

You're welcome on both accountm June.
Joan