Jake By the Lake
Children's Cumulative Rhyme Story22 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Children's Cumulative Rhyme Story
Jake By the Lake
Great entry for the Cumulative Tale Contest. The last verse is my favorite. It's easier to see and hear the rhyme. Good job!
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Children's Cumulative Rhyme Story
Jake By the Lake
Great entry for the Cumulative Tale Contest. The last verse is my favorite. It's easier to see and hear the rhyme. Good job!
Comment Written 27-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A wonderful cumulative tale well composed and presented.
Excellent rhyming scheme throughout.
Descriptive language choices advance the piece.
Thanks for sharing this creative piece.
Great job.
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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A wonderful cumulative tale well composed and presented.
Excellent rhyming scheme throughout.
Descriptive language choices advance the piece.
Thanks for sharing this creative piece.
Great job.
Comment Written 27-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, and thank you for reading my cumulative children's rhyme. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was very entertaining. I liked your humor, imagery and your fun, easy rhymes. Never heard of a Cumulative Tale, sounds an interesting, and I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
This is the musical carousel
That played the song of a somber farewell
That made the turtle hide in her shell
So cute.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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This was very entertaining. I liked your humor, imagery and your fun, easy rhymes. Never heard of a Cumulative Tale, sounds an interesting, and I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
This is the musical carousel
That played the song of a somber farewell
That made the turtle hide in her shell
So cute.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thank you! :-) I'm very glad that you enjoyed my cumulative children's rhyme. Hugs.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Jake born from the lake shake a kiss with a Miss, what a blissð??? near missed. Thank you for sharing this funny story and good luck your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Jake born from the lake shake a kiss with a Miss, what a blissð??? near missed. Thank you for sharing this funny story and good luck your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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:-) Thank you so much for your review and comments.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This topic seems to be one folks are having a hard time understanding. I read through the other entries and several have just missed the whole mark, I think. Yours is one of the few that contained a legitimate cumulative tale and made sense!
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This topic seems to be one folks are having a hard time understanding. I read through the other entries and several have just missed the whole mark, I think. Yours is one of the few that contained a legitimate cumulative tale and made sense!
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed my cumulative rhyme. Hugs.
Comment from Boogienights
I think I may have just read the winning entry. This is delightful and it's has that sing-song quality that everyone loves, especially children. I absolutely loved this. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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I think I may have just read the winning entry. This is delightful and it's has that sing-song quality that everyone loves, especially children. I absolutely loved this. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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wow! Thank you so much for those nice and supportive comments. I humbly appreciate them.
Comment from Jill McCauslin
How clever! I really like your poem. I was wondering how you would know when to end it. I guess you could have kept going. Good luck with the contest. I loved the artwork that you used.
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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How clever! I really like your poem. I was wondering how you would know when to end it. I guess you could have kept going. Good luck with the contest. I loved the artwork that you used.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Hugs.
Comment from miajaffri
This poem could be a perfect little book for children. They would
love the repetition. Your poem reminds me of the book, The Old
Woman who Swallowed a Spider.
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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This poem could be a perfect little book for children. They would
love the repetition. Your poem reminds me of the book, The Old
Woman who Swallowed a Spider.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind comments and review. I'm glad you liked my rhyme. Yes, "The Old Woman Who Swallowed a Fly" is another example of a cumulative rhyme. Thanks again!
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Endearing and very entertaining take off of an old poem I heard as young girl. Very cute and clever! Very catchy and sweet! What a mind to come up with such an adorable poem. Beautiful job!
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Endearing and very entertaining take off of an old poem I heard as young girl. Very cute and clever! Very catchy and sweet! What a mind to come up with such an adorable poem. Beautiful job!
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Thank you so much for your supportive comments and also for reading and reviewing my poem. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. You did a fantastic job on this well rhymed adorable children's poem. I wish you the best of luck!
~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Hello there, my friend. You did a fantastic job on this well rhymed adorable children's poem. I wish you the best of luck!
~Kerry
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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thank you so much, Kerry, for your supportive words and review. It is humbly appreciated.
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You're very welcome
