Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Kindness Sprinkled with Love"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
59 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A straightforward and lovely poem expressing a positive message. The keys represent keys to life and compassionate living opening up richness of life and relationships. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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A straightforward and lovely poem expressing a positive message. The keys represent keys to life and compassionate living opening up richness of life and relationships. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, highly appreciated.
Comment from Aiste Radvilaviciute
I love it, also I love the rhyme. I am a big fan of rhymes so when I see someone finding the right words to rhyme and make sense it just melts my heart.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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I love it, also I love the rhyme. I am a big fan of rhymes so when I see someone finding the right words to rhyme and make sense it just melts my heart.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, especially the rhyming art
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling imagery and clever alliteration keys/kindness. Sugg: take advantage of title space to flesh out the theme and imagery rather than waste it by repeating the words of the poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Startling imagery and clever alliteration keys/kindness. Sugg: take advantage of title space to flesh out the theme and imagery rather than waste it by repeating the words of the poem.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your honest and direct comments on my poem, it was really helpful.
Comment from Eunice Amero
This is a lovely clear poem. There is so much drama in this world. We all should be forgiving and kind. I loved this piece short but meaningful. You did a good job. You must be a nice person to know how to write a nice poem like this.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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This is a lovely clear poem. There is so much drama in this world. We all should be forgiving and kind. I loved this piece short but meaningful. You did a good job. You must be a nice person to know how to write a nice poem like this.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderfully written review and for the six stars, I highly appreciate it.
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you are more than welcome. Have a good day.
Comment from June Sargent
Peace and love are certainly what we need in the world today - and it is achieved only when individuals do their part to spread it through acts of kindness. It is the only antidote to anger and strife. Thank you for the timely reminder.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Peace and love are certainly what we need in the world today - and it is achieved only when individuals do their part to spread it through acts of kindness. It is the only antidote to anger and strife. Thank you for the timely reminder.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for an understanding perspective on my poem and its true what you say about the state of the world and therefor a great nee to spread the truth. Let the light
and the darkness will flee on its own.
Comment from kiwisteveh
I see you have been on this site even longer than me and yet I don't recall coming across your work before, so, hello!
This is a simple poem in standard rhyming couplets and yet it carries a strong message and one our society would do well to listen to.
If I had one suggestion to improve it, it would be to find a stronger word than 'coming' in the second line.
I hope to bump into you again soon.
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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I see you have been on this site even longer than me and yet I don't recall coming across your work before, so, hello!
This is a simple poem in standard rhyming couplets and yet it carries a strong message and one our society would do well to listen to.
If I had one suggestion to improve it, it would be to find a stronger word than 'coming' in the second line.
I hope to bump into you again soon.
Steve
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, it was really helpful especially your comment about the word change.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your poem. I enjoyed reading it. I like the rhyme, the image, the smooth flow, and the great and true message. I agree with you 100%.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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You did a good job with your poem. I enjoyed reading it. I like the rhyme, the image, the smooth flow, and the great and true message. I agree with you 100%.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your great and marvellous review of my poem, it was very helpful.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes beauty is sprinkled around the world like kindness should be. It it was shared more often, we would have a more peaceful world.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Yes beauty is sprinkled around the world like kindness should be. It it was shared more often, we would have a more peaceful world.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review, the world is a challenge only God can fix and He will soon.
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You're welcome. I hope He fixes it soon.
Joan
Comment from Ulla
Awe, this one makes sense to me. I can see how you felt inspired by a feeling from above. I'm not religious but sometimes we do get an inspiration from somewhere. Something we can't explain. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Awe, this one makes sense to me. I can see how you felt inspired by a feeling from above. I'm not religious but sometimes we do get an inspiration from somewhere. Something we can't explain. Ulla:))
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for a wonderfully written review. I'm not religious either but I'm a firm believer in Jesus.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
a lovely sweet and gentle poem with kind elegantly chosen words, very efficacious in making one smile; kindness is so important as humans it is the greatest gift we can share, well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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a lovely sweet and gentle poem with kind elegantly chosen words, very efficacious in making one smile; kindness is so important as humans it is the greatest gift we can share, well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for wonderfully written review about my poem.
About religion I count myself not religious but believe firmly in Jesus.
