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Renewal

Renewed dreams and hopes revive in the spring.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fine presentation filled with spring time when blooms start to bud and our dreams are refreshed, much enjoyed and your uplifting words are a winner fo rme, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-May-2021

reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Thank you, Dolly, for the read and feeback.
Comment from TammyRenee
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I like where you are going with this, but the photo used is distracting and kinda blinding. It takes away from what your message is through your words.

 Comment Written 19-May-2021

reply by the author on 19-May-2021
    Okay, thanks for your feedback. I think it is too late to change the picture.
Comment from RodG
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A delightful combo of poem and artwork.
The alliteration in lines 1 and 2 is quite appropriate to the poem's theme.
Indeed dreams are "freshened" in the Spring.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

reply by the author on 18-May-2021
    Thanks for the read and the feedback. Appeciated.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration show the
marvels of springtime
with "freshened dreams."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

reply by the author on 18-May-2021
    Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback
reply by Pam (respa) on 19-May-2021
    You are welcome.