Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine well metered write for this contest and your poem reads like a dream and I enjoyed the sentiments too, our memories are a treasure, your pome is a winner for me, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-May-2021

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reply by the author on 19-May-2021

Thanks so much for the encouraging feedback!

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

A beautifully written kyrielle that uses repetition very effectively. The nostalgic theme and tone of the poem resonates well. Great presentation. Thanks for sharing this work.

 Comment Written 17-May-2021

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reply by the author on 17-May-2021

I am glad you enjoyed the nostalgia in this piece. In times of uncertainty, when we don't know what the future holds, it's comforting to look back to see how far we have come and what memories we have made. It gives us courage to go on...thanks for the insightful review.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I enjoyed your Kyrielle which reminds us how valuable--"like heirlooms in a treasure chest"--our memories. I found stanza #2 especially poignant. It could stand alone. Rod

 Comment Written 17-May-2021

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reply by the author on 17-May-2021

I am glad you enjoyed the nostalgia in this piece. In times of uncertainty, when we don't know what the future holds, it's comforting to look back to see how far we have come and what memories we have made. It gives us courage to go on...thanks for the insightful review.