Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Football Chapter 17 part 2"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from robyn corum
Barbara,
Man, I hate that we have to talk about the bad stuff in life. But you're absolutely right. And through this novel, you may just inspire some mom to go talk to her kid and you may stop something bad. That is very cool, my friend. VERY cool.
Notes:
1.) Rhonda questioned, "Why (are) we in (C)oach's office?
2.) "That's the problem with abuse(. I)t's (often) learned behavior and flows from generation to generation."
Great job.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Barbara,
Man, I hate that we have to talk about the bad stuff in life. But you're absolutely right. And through this novel, you may just inspire some mom to go talk to her kid and you may stop something bad. That is very cool, my friend. VERY cool.
Notes:
1.) Rhonda questioned, "Why (are) we in (C)oach's office?
2.) "That's the problem with abuse(. I)t's (often) learned behavior and flows from generation to generation."
Great job.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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I've made the corrections. Again, thank you for the help.
Comment from Judy Lawless
Barbara, you've added another little twist to this chapter, presenting a new challenge for Katherine, and Gabriel is always there for her. She still seems unsure of him though, or maybe her own feelings. Good work. Looking forward to the next one.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Barbara, you've added another little twist to this chapter, presenting a new challenge for Katherine, and Gabriel is always there for her. She still seems unsure of him though, or maybe her own feelings. Good work. Looking forward to the next one.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AJ McCall
"But' what, Katherine?????!??!?!?!?!? Just accept him! He is a great guy, AND HE IS PERFECT FOR YOU! I'm getting frustrated LOL watching how this is playing out. But I know Katherine is going to give in... soon. But, YOU CAN"T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT! I have to know what happens next.
And what happened with Rhonda... that's just terrible! I've never experienced that because of how my parents are raising me, which I'm very glad about. I didn't see any typos, so you're good. Can't wait til the next chapter!
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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"But' what, Katherine?????!??!?!?!?!? Just accept him! He is a great guy, AND HE IS PERFECT FOR YOU! I'm getting frustrated LOL watching how this is playing out. But I know Katherine is going to give in... soon. But, YOU CAN"T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT! I have to know what happens next.
And what happened with Rhonda... that's just terrible! I've never experienced that because of how my parents are raising me, which I'm very glad about. I didn't see any typos, so you're good. Can't wait til the next chapter!
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Sorry for the late reply, you're welcome!!!
Comment from judiverse
Rhonda's story was interesting. Naturally, you'd think of the parents first as being the abusers, but in this case it was the boyfriend. It sounds like Gabriel will take care him. I wondered if he shouldn't have been referred to the authorities. The abuse was criminal. Wouldn't it be the guidance counselor's place to handle the situation? This is another instance where Katherine has to act above and beyond. This is just another example of how she's becoming spread too thing. I don't know about Gabriel stepping in and organizing things. The boys are showing they can be responsible. Great chapter. judi
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Rhonda's story was interesting. Naturally, you'd think of the parents first as being the abusers, but in this case it was the boyfriend. It sounds like Gabriel will take care him. I wondered if he shouldn't have been referred to the authorities. The abuse was criminal. Wouldn't it be the guidance counselor's place to handle the situation? This is another instance where Katherine has to act above and beyond. This is just another example of how she's becoming spread too thing. I don't know about Gabriel stepping in and organizing things. The boys are showing they can be responsible. Great chapter. judi
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. I think Gabriel will prove to be helpful.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from amahra
I know I'm coming into this book really late, but I do like what I've read. It seems a very interesting story with today's themes. First, I like the unique way Gabriel is going to help Kenny by teaching him the principles of an athlete. This is a lot better than having the kid tossed in jail especially after learning this behavior from his upbringing. There two things: Mr. Morgan says to his wife, "Don't tell me to calm down when this scumbag's been abusing [my] daughter" Should it be [our] daughter? Also, Gabriel tells Jeremy to take a bath and later his mom would [read his story] should that be [read him a story?] Just wondering.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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I know I'm coming into this book really late, but I do like what I've read. It seems a very interesting story with today's themes. First, I like the unique way Gabriel is going to help Kenny by teaching him the principles of an athlete. This is a lot better than having the kid tossed in jail especially after learning this behavior from his upbringing. There two things: Mr. Morgan says to his wife, "Don't tell me to calm down when this scumbag's been abusing [my] daughter" Should it be [our] daughter? Also, Gabriel tells Jeremy to take a bath and later his mom would [read his story] should that be [read him a story?] Just wondering.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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You're correct about the our. I only had boys and as I watch them raise their daughters, when in anger it would be my daughter because of the protective Dad in them. The second one, I will think about. Gabriel isn't an English major, he's a jock. LOL Thank you for dropping by.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is another fine write and with a lot happening. I think both Katherine and Gabriel handled the situation very well. Looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Hi Barbara, this is another fine write and with a lot happening. I think both Katherine and Gabriel handled the situation very well. Looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Your writing is excellent. The part where Mr. Morgan sat, Katherine continued, "Sir, I'm not accusing you of abusing your daughter. All I'm doing is stating a fact that Rhonda's covered with bruises. As a parent myself, I'd want to know. I'm sure you'd like to know what caused them."
Also me I want to know who was cruel to Rhonda and why who ever caused the bruises on Rhonda's legs and arms.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Hello Barb
Your writing is excellent. The part where Mr. Morgan sat, Katherine continued, "Sir, I'm not accusing you of abusing your daughter. All I'm doing is stating a fact that Rhonda's covered with bruises. As a parent myself, I'd want to know. I'm sure you'd like to know what caused them."
Also me I want to know who was cruel to Rhonda and why who ever caused the bruises on Rhonda's legs and arms.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Sankey
So pleased the SIXES are up again. This deserves them! A great chapter with some very important truths included. No spags and good picture. Keep em coming.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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So pleased the SIXES are up again. This deserves them! A great chapter with some very important truths included. No spags and good picture. Keep em coming.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
The remark, "He's a great guy, but..." says a lot doesn't it? That momentary hesitation means she's unlikely to make that leap into happiness, were she gets a caring partner, and a great role model for her sons. Beautifully written Barbara, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : Why (are) we in coach's office? 2: Why (do) you want her to do that?
3 : (N)either has her mom.4: Watched the Morgan(')s leave. 5: Jeremy(,) take your bath.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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The remark, "He's a great guy, but..." says a lot doesn't it? That momentary hesitation means she's unlikely to make that leap into happiness, were she gets a caring partner, and a great role model for her sons. Beautifully written Barbara, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : Why (are) we in coach's office? 2: Why (do) you want her to do that?
3 : (N)either has her mom.4: Watched the Morgan(')s leave. 5: Jeremy(,) take your bath.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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WOW!! Thank you for the catches. I really needed and appreciate your help.
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My pleasure Barbara,
Comment from nomi338
"But" nothing. She knows her heart is melting faster than a snow ball in Miami in mid July. A blind man could clearly see that these two are headed for a serious committed relationship. It could not happen to a better suited couple anywhere as far as I can see. I love this story.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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"But" nothing. She knows her heart is melting faster than a snow ball in Miami in mid July. A blind man could clearly see that these two are headed for a serious committed relationship. It could not happen to a better suited couple anywhere as far as I can see. I love this story.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you for your generous support. I do appreciate it.
