Midst Of A Storm
A poem48 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very nice rhyming poem about one of my favorite things....storms. I think they are an exciting display of nature's power, although I would never want anyone hurt. Thus is well written and very descriptive, thanks for sharing. :)
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This is a very nice rhyming poem about one of my favorite things....storms. I think they are an exciting display of nature's power, although I would never want anyone hurt. Thus is well written and very descriptive, thanks for sharing. :)
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Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
You have written another beautifully worded secret of the Universe and have painted a vivid picture in the minds of the readers! There are many kinds of storms in this world and we should find a way to clam them and dance in the rain. Thank you for sharing a lovely poem on Nature.
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You have written another beautifully worded secret of the Universe and have painted a vivid picture in the minds of the readers! There are many kinds of storms in this world and we should find a way to clam them and dance in the rain. Thank you for sharing a lovely poem on Nature.
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Comment from Begin Again
I am not a poet... partly because I can't manage to paint a picture (like you have mastered) with so few words. I need to ramble on and murk it up with details. you, on the other hand, draw the reader into the "storm". Well done. Smiles, Carol
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I am not a poet... partly because I can't manage to paint a picture (like you have mastered) with so few words. I need to ramble on and murk it up with details. you, on the other hand, draw the reader into the "storm". Well done. Smiles, Carol
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Comment from Bonnie Seach
Every line paints a picture of the storm's progress. How powerful are the elements!
For me the saddest words are:...the birds make haste.Their homes and lives are laid to waste...One might forget although a bird can fly and avoid a storm, it loses its home and can also lose it's life.
I have learned the importance of spacing in writing. It is to help the reader to enjoy the work. If writers prioritize a reader's view they will always have a following. Kind regards
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Every line paints a picture of the storm's progress. How powerful are the elements!
For me the saddest words are:...the birds make haste.Their homes and lives are laid to waste...One might forget although a bird can fly and avoid a storm, it loses its home and can also lose it's life.
I have learned the importance of spacing in writing. It is to help the reader to enjoy the work. If writers prioritize a reader's view they will always have a following. Kind regards
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks perchance Nature has conscience like human being to follow and act, nothing calamitous happened if; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This poem speaks perchance Nature has conscience like human being to follow and act, nothing calamitous happened if; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment from dragonpoet
This poem tells of the calm before an growing storm. I like the personifacation of the metaphor as strobing and the personification
of the storm as stroking.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
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This poem tells of the calm before an growing storm. I like the personifacation of the metaphor as strobing and the personification
of the storm as stroking.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
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Comment from Ross E Silke
Beautiful piece here. Calming, effective, rhythmic, dynamic, and holds my attention. Great rhyme choices. Can feel the sensory images in the poem. Clever and enjoyable. Excellent
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Beautiful piece here. Calming, effective, rhythmic, dynamic, and holds my attention. Great rhyme choices. Can feel the sensory images in the poem. Clever and enjoyable. Excellent
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Comment from DentedSyke
Well, I can see why your poems have won awards. The imagery is staggeringly vivid and forceful. I really like the verbs you used as well; they are at once active and gentle. It's difficult to write a really thought-provoking poem, but you seem to be masterful at it. Nice work!
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Well, I can see why your poems have won awards. The imagery is staggeringly vivid and forceful. I really like the verbs you used as well; they are at once active and gentle. It's difficult to write a really thought-provoking poem, but you seem to be masterful at it. Nice work!
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Comment Written 16-May-2021
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Thanks, mate! Cheers!