Midst Of A Storm
A poem48 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Virtual Six.
Excellent.
These series of couplets are tough, in one block, tells of an impending action...a warning, a gathering, a forming in order to hit back, hit back on the very thing that compels its destruction.
A strong and resolute piece of writing. Great rhythm, with a good sense of direction, never swaying from the thread.
Bravo.
I enjoyed this, and could have read more.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Virtual Six.
Excellent.
These series of couplets are tough, in one block, tells of an impending action...a warning, a gathering, a forming in order to hit back, hit back on the very thing that compels its destruction.
A strong and resolute piece of writing. Great rhythm, with a good sense of direction, never swaying from the thread.
Bravo.
I enjoyed this, and could have read more.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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thank you
Comment from irishauthorme
Remarkable how your words and lines create a picture of that terrible storm! Live in Wyoming, land of sudden weather changes, almost constant wind, hailstorms with golf--ball sized hailstones.
Neat that you included the scurrying birds, here we know a Spring storm is coming when the mating birds stop singing. The hard wind raises waves on the nearby reservoir that make the small fishing boats run for the marina.
Yeah, Mother Nature!
irish
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Remarkable how your words and lines create a picture of that terrible storm! Live in Wyoming, land of sudden weather changes, almost constant wind, hailstorms with golf--ball sized hailstones.
Neat that you included the scurrying birds, here we know a Spring storm is coming when the mating birds stop singing. The hard wind raises waves on the nearby reservoir that make the small fishing boats run for the marina.
Yeah, Mother Nature!
irish
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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Comment from robyn corum
PX,
This is certainly true. And for those of us who know we are in the pathways of some of the worst beasts of mother nature - we know we are supposed to plan extra hard to try to protect ourselves and our stuff from her wrath. If we don't? It's on us.
Thanks!
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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PX,
This is certainly true. And for those of us who know we are in the pathways of some of the worst beasts of mother nature - we know we are supposed to plan extra hard to try to protect ourselves and our stuff from her wrath. If we don't? It's on us.
Thanks!
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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thank you
Comment from Zan Zan
May this poem, reach new heights of success and continue to rise higher in your life and career. All the Best. In love love love love with the vintage cig by the way. never stop writing.
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May this poem, reach new heights of success and continue to rise higher in your life and career. All the Best. In love love love love with the vintage cig by the way. never stop writing.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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thank you very much
Comment from L. Kalere
You've truly captured the essence of a storm through choice of words, imagery, and personification. I especially like "nature is being natural as it intended" even as we try to place meaning on a storm's devastation. Rhyming is good, but I think you could use fewer words in a couple of the lines. Excellent poetry.
Linda
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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You've truly captured the essence of a storm through choice of words, imagery, and personification. I especially like "nature is being natural as it intended" even as we try to place meaning on a storm's devastation. Rhyming is good, but I think you could use fewer words in a couple of the lines. Excellent poetry.
Linda
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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thank you
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written poem you have penned about in the midst of the storm. You used calming and great descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very nice and very well written poem you have penned about in the midst of the storm. You used calming and great descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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Comment from C. F. Rogers
This is one of my favorites! The line "nature is being natural as it intended" spoke to me and it made me think that nature truly doesn't know how or why it is - it just occurs. There cannot be one single blame placed, but it is a collective effort of destruction.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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This is one of my favorites! The line "nature is being natural as it intended" spoke to me and it made me think that nature truly doesn't know how or why it is - it just occurs. There cannot be one single blame placed, but it is a collective effort of destruction.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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thank you very much
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This raises interesting questions along with some unusual descriptive lines. There are some subtle lines with personification being implied, such as: "The same clouds that are plotting silence. /To create an act of violence." My favorite line is: Nature has awoken and longs to roam. Only suggestion: count syllables and work on making rhymed poems more uniform in syllable count per line.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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This raises interesting questions along with some unusual descriptive lines. There are some subtle lines with personification being implied, such as: "The same clouds that are plotting silence. /To create an act of violence." My favorite line is: Nature has awoken and longs to roam. Only suggestion: count syllables and work on making rhymed poems more uniform in syllable count per line.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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thank you
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant entry dear poeticXcape! I was overwhelmed by your poem. I think you have successfully managed to convey the wrath of nature even though unintentional. Wow and bravo!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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This is a brilliant entry dear poeticXcape! I was overwhelmed by your poem. I think you have successfully managed to convey the wrath of nature even though unintentional. Wow and bravo!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 18-May-2021
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thank you very much
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Liked the format and the flow. is this a particular poetic form? if so, what is it? in any event, you mastered it. I liked the last lines best
Whether it comes sharply or expanding in a swarm.
You can not place blame in the midst of a storm.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Liked the format and the flow. is this a particular poetic form? if so, what is it? in any event, you mastered it. I liked the last lines best
Whether it comes sharply or expanding in a swarm.
You can not place blame in the midst of a storm.
Comment Written 18-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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I don't have a clue what the format is called im afraid I haven't studied poetry I just write it. thank you