Togetherness
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Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I have now read every entry in the contest. I have come back to yours because it's the best of all. You officially have my vote. *smile* Thanks for playing and good luck!
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I have now read every entry in the contest. I have come back to yours because it's the best of all. You officially have my vote. *smile* Thanks for playing and good luck!
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thanks for the top review and, of course, your vote. Much appreciated.
Comment from mobileliz
I really liked this. It would have taken a book the size of Gone with the Wind to say as much as you did in these 15 words. Nice set of antonyms. Nice job.
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I really liked this. It would have taken a book the size of Gone with the Wind to say as much as you did in these 15 words. Nice set of antonyms. Nice job.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well constructed Antonym poem. The lines between beginning and end of the piece cement the opposing words effectively. Nicely created Thanks for sharing.
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A well constructed Antonym poem. The lines between beginning and end of the piece cement the opposing words effectively. Nicely created Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Togetherness
The two of us,woven as one
if unstitched,will unravel to become
Loneliness"
You have chosen great words for this antonym contest. Like your use of the words, "woven" and "unstitched" to illustrate.
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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"Togetherness
The two of us,woven as one
if unstitched,will unravel to become
Loneliness"
You have chosen great words for this antonym contest. Like your use of the words, "woven" and "unstitched" to illustrate.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. This was not an easy one to write.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a very well done Antonym poem. I never tried one but I may. Excellent imagery and visuals.
Nice presentation and artwork. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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This was a very well done Antonym poem. I never tried one but I may. Excellent imagery and visuals.
Nice presentation and artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. You should give this type of poem a go.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and combatting loneliness can be a trial, but life is all about seeing the best in our days and grabbing life before it ends, there is no time to be lonely. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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A poignant write and combatting loneliness can be a trial, but life is all about seeing the best in our days and grabbing life before it ends, there is no time to be lonely. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. Hopefully loneliness is something few people go through.
Comment from T B Botts
This is a good poem. A perfect example of an antonym. How blessed are those who have someone to share their life with. It makes life so much sweeter. Good luck in the contest.
Tom
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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This is a good poem. A perfect example of an antonym. How blessed are those who have someone to share their life with. It makes life so much sweeter. Good luck in the contest.
Tom
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
