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The King of Fast Food

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9 total reviews 
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Great tribute to the Burger King. I love that outfit and enjoy their burgers. You provide a good description of the life your family (or your hero's family) had when you were young. Excellent descriptive imagery and visuals, I love your presentation.

This may be the contest winner, I wish you a lot of luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
    Thank you for this great review. I actually got 3rd place, which is wonderful. Thanks again! :)
reply by Eternal Muse on 01-Jun-2021
    Congrats on placing in the contest!
Comment from kahpot
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Very well done, that first outing and taste is exquisite, Though personally K.F.C. is my preferred, I enjoyed this memory of the first time, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
    I love KFC too, especially the mashed potatoes! Thank you for this wonderful review, it's really appreciated. :)
Comment from tfawcus
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Maybe you should offer this to BurgerKing for their next marketing drive. Keep the copyright, though! If you play your cards right, they should keep you in burgers for life. LOL

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
    Hahaha...that would be awesome! Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Boogienights
your true story of how you ate your first whopper is so good
Now you have made me wish I could sink my teeth my into one of those Whoppers
Gert.

 Comment Written 19-May-2021


reply by the author on 20-May-2021
    Thank you for reading my poem. I love fast food WAY too much..hahaha. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have never understood the interest in burgers on buns! It is not something I eat and they don't seem at all appetising to me, but if this food was forbidden for what ever reason when you were young then I can understand the love you have now. I loved butter growing up and my Mother only bought margarine and I am now a huge butter fan and love it melted on toast! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-May-2021


reply by the author on 14-May-2021
    Thank you, I love buttered toast too. My mom bought margarine as well, it must have been cheaper. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from roof35
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This made me chuckle but I am curious. Bubble and Squeak? We had a lot of potatoes and pasta but I never heard of these two. This is an excellent entry for the Fast Food in Rhyme contest.

 Comment Written 13-May-2021


reply by the author on 13-May-2021
    My mom is from England where it's eaten often. It consists of leftover vegetables and whatever else you can find , combined with mashed potatoes and fried until crispy. At least, that was my mom's version...lol. Thank you so much for reading and for this great review. :)
reply by roof35 on 14-May-2021
    Thanks for explaining.
Comment from BeckyRae
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Very good! I like Burger King but we don't have one close to where I live. Yes, the Whoppers are great. As a kid I was thrilled with a root beer float from the A & W drive-in. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-May-2021


reply by the author on 13-May-2021
    A&W is also great. I loved their root beer served in glass mugs and their Papa Burger. No A&W in our town though. Thank you so much for this exceptional review. :)
reply by BeckyRae on 14-May-2021
    Don't have an A&W here either. I miss it.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

This was a fun answer to the Fast Food challenge. hahahaha I remember the same thing - as far as how those burgers seemed pretty big when we were pretty small. Well, as a matter of fact, those Whoppers still seem pretty stinking BIG even now! hahaha Great idea to include 'Have it your way'. *smile*

Thanks a lot and good luck!

 Comment Written 13-May-2021


reply by the author on 13-May-2021
    They are tasty as well as big, but alas I'm on a diet. It was fun to write about though and maybe I'll splurge on my birthday. Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Begin Again
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Haven't had one in years, but the thought sounds good. If I remember, it was tough to get your mouth around them, but they sure did taste good. Burger King better send you a few free for this outstanding poem in their favor. smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 13-May-2021


reply by the author on 13-May-2021
    I wouldn't mind that at all, but I'm dieting right now! Thanks so much for this great review. :)